G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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22 thoughts on “As The Sun Sinks Down”
so sad, isn’t it? but I always have hope for a better and kinder world
Another, year of, global conflict, wars, ignorance of the individual governments, and, it’s still the people who, will, always and, forever get, the, short end of that, “stick”, unfortunately.
A powerful, thought-provoking, heart-touching poem, Ivor. ‘Tis sad. But I will remain hopeful that people will individually seek to be better and more compassionate…which could change the world in positive ways. I wonder if the sun and moon ever talk about hoping human-beans will change?
(((HUGS))) āļøšššššāļø
I know Willow, and tonight Iām writing one about moon ā¦ I feel the sun and the moon are our guardians and they would be so disappointed in the way their children are behaving š„²šš
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so sad, isn’t it? but I always have hope for a better and kinder world
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Letās hope so Beth
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Happy New Year, Ivor. A thought provoking poem.
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It might be a new year but the Wars of the World are still raging and there is no end in sight Robbie šš„²
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I know šš
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The New Yearās Eve sun
Is perpetually the finale one
(such poweful lines!)
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Thank you kindly Maranta šššš
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Nice presentation! Happy New Years, Ivor! š
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Thank you Michele
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Welcome!
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Another, year of, global conflict, wars, ignorance of the individual governments, and, it’s still the people who, will, always and, forever get, the, short end of that, “stick”, unfortunately.
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Things are not improving … they’ll be a time when the new year will just disappear …
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A powerful, thought-provoking, heart-touching poem, Ivor. ‘Tis sad. But I will remain hopeful that people will individually seek to be better and more compassionate…which could change the world in positive ways. I wonder if the sun and moon ever talk about hoping human-beans will change?
(((HUGS))) āļøšššššāļø
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Iām sure they do Carolyn šššš ā¦ we are their children š„²ā¤ļø
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Sadly, an ongoing saga, well-expressed, Ivor. š¤
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Thank you kindly Eugenia šššš¶
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You’re welcome, Ivor. š
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This is a sad ,deep poem Ivor but very relevant to our sad planet šš
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I know Willow, and tonight Iām writing one about moon ā¦ I feel the sun and the moon are our guardians and they would be so disappointed in the way their children are behaving š„²šš
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I totally agree with you Ivor šš
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A sad sign of our times, Ivor. I hope the sun rises for all of us this year, and we can sleep better in a peaceful world! Sending you love.š
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Thank you Cindy ā¦ we all need to be extra kind to our planet šš
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