G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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21 thoughts on “An Ending Before the End, or Beyond the Oasis”
Another amazing trio, Ivor!!!
Beautiful street art.
Powerful, heart-touching poem.
And THAT song of Tom’s always brings the tears to my eyes.
(I always hit the song to play, then read your poem through twice, and quite often that combo brings some tears. 🙂 )
(((HUGS))) and hope your day is going well! Sir Frankie’s day, too! ❤️❤️
Yes, it is!
Yes, that hit me and made me sad…your poem’s subject/question is sobering and so important. It should make everyone want to do something to help prevent the dying. 🌏💚
A very imaginative piece Ivor.
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Thank you kindly Sadje 😊🌏😍
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My pleasure
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an excellent interpretation told in poetic words
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Thank you very much Beth
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Thoughtful and thought-provoking, post and song. 🙏🏻
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Thank you very much Michele
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You’re very welcome, Ivor.
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Another amazing trio, Ivor!!!
Beautiful street art.
Powerful, heart-touching poem.
And THAT song of Tom’s always brings the tears to my eyes.
(I always hit the song to play, then read your poem through twice, and quite often that combo brings some tears. 🙂 )
(((HUGS))) and hope your day is going well! Sir Frankie’s day, too! ❤️❤️
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Thank you Carolyn … Tom’s song was a superb “ending” for my poem … and poem is metaphorical question of “why are we silently watching our planet die?”
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Yes, it is!
Yes, that hit me and made me sad…your poem’s subject/question is sobering and so important. It should make everyone want to do something to help prevent the dying. 🌏💚
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Thank you for understanding my abstract concept 😊🌏💙💜
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Love the metaphors Ivor❣️
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Yes … i was not to be too nasty about the World’s apathy toward our dying planet
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Ivor, love your interpretation.
Hope you are well.
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Awesome
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Yes … awesome might be a good term for my abstract imagination
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Amazing write
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Thank you for your awesome response
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A very thought provoking poem, Ivor! ❤ Well done! I loved it!
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Thank you for your kind words Carol 🤗📖😍🌏
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