Our Kingdom in the Sky (a Tanka)


Our Kingdom in the Sky (a Tanka)


Up there above me

I feel the sun within me

In the same blue sky

I see the moon watching me

The universe protects me




“There Is a Kingdom” Lyrics by Nick Cave

Just like a bird that sings up the sun
In a dawn so very dark
Such is my faith for you
Such is my faith
And all the world’s darkness can’t swallow up
A single spark
Such is my love for you
Such is my love

There is a kingdom
There is a king
And he lives without
And he lives within

The starry heavens above me
The moral law within
So the world appears
So the world appears
This day so sweet
It will never come again
So the world appears
Through this mist of tears

There is a kingdom
There is a king
And he lives without
And he lives within




Ivor Steven (c) March 2024

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

18 thoughts on “Our Kingdom in the Sky (a Tanka)”

  1. Oh, Ivor! This is so wonderful and lovely…your photos, your poem, and Mr. Cave’s song!!!
    That protection we feel from the sky, sun, moon and stars is priceless! To see the moon and sun together is a joy! Makes me feel humbled and grateful! πŸ™‚ Your reminding us is a powerful, important, encouraging message! Thank you!
    (((HUGS))) ❀️❀️❀️

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    1. Thank you very much Carolyn … I was trying to remind ourselves what a sheltered existence we enjoy, here on planet earth πŸŒπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸŒžπŸŒ”πŸ’›πŸ˜πŸ’•

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