My Throwback poem from September 2021 was originally titled “Worlds Beyond Thoughts”, however, when I published the piece in my new book “Until Eyes Here Sound” I altered it to “My World, My Thoughts”
My poem today is made from a list of comments that I have left on fellow ‘Bloggers’ sites, and in order of stanza appearance, these are the writers’ sites for you to visit.
Bart – https://bartbarkerpoet.com/
Sadje – https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/
Punam – https://paeansunpluggedblog.wordpress.com/
Sadje – https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/
Annette – https://aikalandros.com/
Dwight – https://rothpoetry.wordpress.com/
Michelle~M – https://herwritinghaven.com/
Catxman – https://catxman.wordpress.com/
Mark – https://havocandconsequence.wordpress.com/
Cindy – https://uniquelyfitblog.com/
Carol – https://therapybits.com/
Cassa – https://flickerofthoughts.com/
Windwhisperer – https://wildwindwhisperer.wordpress.com/
My World, My Thoughts
Laws are merely guidelines
For the arrows of love to climb
Mirror mirror on the wall
Recalls our joys and falls
Behind every mask, there is a weathered face
Behind every face old lines survive in place
Behind every place memories live with grace
Evil eyes lurk in veiled skies
The wisdom of native ancestors should be listened to
And not be lost to the modern ways of this arrogant world
The way of modern progress
Is to leave nature shamefully undressed
Nature and renewal walk down the garden path hand in hand
I hear church bells ring
I see the mice die
And the clouds always cry
Keep the cup full, turn the power on
And the answer will come
Like a big jigsaw puzzle
Not all the pieces will fit back
And overall the world will look the same
I cannot dwell on what has been
While I feel my blade of grass is alive and green
Above and beyond the crusty dirt
The universe is a symphonic concert
They say that the truth hurts
Beware of cold desserts
Ivor Steven (c) March 2024
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A great poem my friend. Love these lines…
Behind every mask, there is a weathered face
Behind every face old lines survive in place
Behind every place memories live with grace
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Thank you very much Dwight, I’m so pleased you enjoyed my odd creation 😊🌏
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They are the best! :>)
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Beautifully written
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Thank you very much Sadje 😊🌏📖
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My pleasure
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A wonderful poem Ivor, awesome to get a mention too! Xx
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Thank you very much Carol … storing my “comments” makes for an interesting poem 😊🌏😍
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This is wonderful and so creative, Ivor!
And the word-pics in your poem are vivid, powerful, and memorable!
(((HUGS))) ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you for your wonderful comments Carolyn… one of those creative pieces that I get a lot of satisfaction from … 😊🌏📚💛💕😍🐶📖
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Incredibly beautiful verse, Ivor, and an amazing video. Excellent pairing!
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Thank you very
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Whoops …thank you very much Nancy 😊🌏📖📚
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Most welcome, dear Ivor! 😊
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My old bones have trouble typing on my phone 📱
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Very well done, Ivor 🙂
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Thank you very much Sue … I do enjoy putting these pieces together 📖😊
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I love how you put this together
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Thank you Beth … I enjoy creating these collaborative pieces 📚😊🌏
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I like this Ivor.🥰
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Thank you very much Arlene 😊📚📖
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Very fun!
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Yes, I had fun putting this one together
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I bet!
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This is so creative, Ivor! I love it!❣️
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Thank you Eugenia … a process that combines my comments in a creative and enjoyable way for concerned 😊🌏📖📚😍
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My pleasure, Ivor! 💖
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Your poetry is wonderful. 🌹
I also enjoyed the remarkable video. It expresses just how I feel when on a beautiful and empty sand dune beach. 😁
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Thank you for your very kind words Lesley 😊🌏😍📖📚
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My pleasure, Ivor 🙏🌹
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A very interesting and creative poem, Ivor. It is much like found poetry with book titles.
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Thank you Dwight … my little comments/anecdotes became one big poem 😊🌏📖📚
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