


Cold Feet
I wandered outside
the evening air
was damp and cold
and the moon was sharing
the dappled midnight sky
with dark satiny clouds
forlornly I looked up
and quizzically asked the moon
βI have failed
my words were drowned in the hail
Iβm poor and unbound
all I have is muddy ground
who listens anyhow?
where do I go now?β
do not fret my friend
βas Confucius said,
It does not matter how slowly you go
as long as you do not stop
and that old Japanese Proverb
Fall down seven times, stand up eight β
I wandered back inside
the desk lantern was still burning
I reopened my torn notebook
and begun writing again

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Most inspiring, dear Ivor! ππ
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Thank you for your lovely words Nancy ππππ
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The moon is most inspiring
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Heβs a most reassuring moon πππππ
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If you listen to it then it gives the right advice
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To listen is the key Sadje π
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Exactly
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True …Ivor never give up ππ
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Thanks Willowβ¦ Mr Moonβs advice was reassuring πππππ
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So beautiful Ivor! π Loved it! Xoxo
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Thank you for your wonderful words Carol πππ
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The moon is so wise! Gives perfect advice. So glad you listened to him! π
Never give in or give up! Keep being inspired and keep writing, Ivor! π
(((HUGS))) β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you for your kind encouragement Carolyn ππππππΆπΆ
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and begin again, exactly where you are
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Yes β¦ thatβs my story
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Captivating and inspiring post shared Ivor.
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Thank you for your kind words of encouragement πππ
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Very well constructed advocacy for never giving up
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Thank you Derrick β¦ I shall keep listening to the moon π
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Nice
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Thank you π
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Well this is all sorts of wonderful. Such a brooding mood to this one, but with an uplift π
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YEAH …
I was rescued by the moon,
just in time for the mid-afternoon
Bugs Bunny cartoon
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There are times when you feel you’ve lost your touch, your inspiration. But Creativity is part of you, and it doesn’t sleep for very long. It’s always there to encourage you to try again. And you happily oblige.
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Thank you for your words of wisdom Claudia …
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Your poems are lovely, Ivor! Keep writing!
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Thank you Dawn β¦ I love writing my poems, but the aging process is slowly catching up with me ππ
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Yes, I can relate to that!
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Just what I needed β€οΈπ
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Iβm pleased my words helped you πππ
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Beautiful poem! Yes slow but steady makes us sucessful! Well shared π
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Thank you for your kind words and support Priti ππ
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Such great advice and a beautiful poem, Ivor! β₯
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Thank you very much for your kind words Niki πππ
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PS I like that song and the vid. I’m so glad he came back! Whew.
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I loved the music/video too and it suited my poem πΆππ
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It did. Hey, did you take that moon photo (feature image)?
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Yes, all the images are mine on my iPhone β¦ I crop and enhance them to improve their appearance β¦ πππ
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Dude! I was hoping you’d say that. We have to have an Ivor week on under1000skies.org with your pix and poems. I know you’re housed, but all the Gems are for the times between submissions. I hope you like this idea, but either way, love the moon pics!
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Hi Niki β¦ Iβm honoured, thank you very much for your kindness ππππ
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Sorry about the “Dude” thing — I need to learn to talk like a grown up one of these days.
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Haha thatβs fine β¦ πππ
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