


The Cloud’s Tides Are Turning (a Tanka)
Imperceptible
Is the waxen crescent moon
To the naked eye
In the wispy midday sky
Where the cloud’s tides are turning


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AHH! Perfect blend of pix, verse and song! πΆπβ€οΈ
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Oh both your photos, words and musc are awesome! My “eye” doesn’t work.. grrrrπ€π
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Thank you Cindy πππ
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Thank you very much Nancy πππΆπ
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Most welcome, dear Ivor! π€
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‘the wispy midday sky’…a most beautiful phrase, Ivor.
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Thank you for your kind words Lois πππ
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Always
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Thank you Beth
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Beautiful shots Ivor
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Thank you very much Sadje β¦ the was almost invisible in between the clouds πππ
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Youβre welcome. But well caught on the camera
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Thank you ππ
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Most welcome
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This is delightful, Ivor.
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Thank you very much Robbie πππ
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You are getting very good at haiku and tankas, Ivor.
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Thank you my friendβ¦ the concise structures are good for my poetryβs writings ππ
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Yes, I found that to be the case as well. I love writing them.
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I think I prefer the Tanka ππ
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The haiku really does cut it to bare bones!
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Agree π
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Delicate photos and calming lines. π
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Thank you for your lovely words Michele πππ
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Well seen and written
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Thank you Derrick β¦ it took many minutes to find it π
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Wow pics
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Thank you kindly
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Lovely shots, what a song! ππΌ
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Thank you very much Punam ππππΆ
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My pleasure. π
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Beautiful photos n Tanka, Ivor β¨
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Thank you for your very kind words, Navin
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You’re welcome, Ivor
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