


Today’s Slate-Grey Sky
Dark as tomorrow’s blackboard
Dreary as a bitumen road
Dim like a bat’s cave
Dull like Santa’s razor blade
Dingy and dankly humid
Dowdy as a politician’s banal promise
Dawn to dusk
Daylight has lost its shine
Dethroned by a dusty slate-grey sky


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Love all the d-sounds!
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Thank you Punam … oh, those damn “D” words 😀
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You are welcome, Ivor! Those definitive “D” words were delightful. 😃❤️
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Dramatically so!
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😃😉
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so well said
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Thank you Beth
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WELL SAID, I swear I didn’t read Beth’s words until after i wrote this, Ivor.., lol 💕👏👏
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Thank you for your dramatic words, Cindy 😊🌏⛅️
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You’re so very welcome, Ivor. It’s that kind of day here today too💕
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This morning, my sky is still slate-grey, but maybe the sun will reappear in the afternoon 🤗💕🌏😍🌞
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I see a patch… I’m heading out now.. xo fingers crossed for you! 💓
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Me and Frankie are heading out for our walkies … very grey, but not raining … 🌝🐶
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Oh good for you Ivor. I got mine in too💓
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Hopefully the sun will shine tomorrow
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Maybe by tomorrow afternoon the weatherman says 😊🌏⛅️
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🌞☀️
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Dynamic!
The word-pictures you’ve created in your poem are so vivid, so powerful, so emotion-filled, Ivor!
Often a grey sky day reminds me to slow down and feel the peace…and to remember to always have sunshine in my heart. 🙂 The world can be wintery, but I can share the spring! 🙂
(((HUGS))) ❤️🌞❤️
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Thank you for your thoroughly generous and kind words, Carolyn … I’ve slept in and the slate-grey shy greets my awakening … maybe the sun will reappear this afternoon on the way to my Geelong Writers monthly dinner/social event … we are launching our biannual anthology “Anomaly Street” and I’m happy to say, one of my poems made the edition… and I’ll post that story tomorrow 🤗📘🌏💕😍🐶🎶
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Dramatic and definitive, dear Ivor! A highly evocative piece! Love it! 🖤🖊️
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I feel that way when it’s raining!
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