
My Tanka, “1” of Five
FROM: Into The Light, Sunflower Tanka, Anthology
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Under a White Light (a Tanka)
Within the forest
There’s a glen where children play
Under a white light
Where mystical faeries
Flit around, happy and free
Ivor Steven (c) December 2024

beautiful ❤
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Children and fairies, a different world. Well written.
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Stunning tanka, superb addition of the Velvets! 😎🧝🏽💛🎶🎄🌝
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Thank you Nancy… the Velvets song seemed to be a happy dance tune for my poem 😊🌏🎶
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A lovely poem Ivor.
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Thank you very much, Sadje 😍🌏📘
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Most welcome
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Congratulations!
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Thank you kindly, Dawn 😊🌏📘😍
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Such a beautiful perfect poem of such a wonderful perfect place! 🙂
Congrats on the publication, Ivor! 🙂
(((HUGS))) 💚🎄❤️🎄🤍
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Thank you Carolyn … and we’re having a perfect holiday here in Ballarat … Frankie is so excited to be playing with his doggie cousins, Whiskey and Cookie … a happy Christmas woof, woof, for Coops from Frankie 😍🐶🌏🤗🎶😎🐾🎄🤶💕📖
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Coop sends a happy Christmas woof woof and sniff sniff to Frankie, Whiskey and Cookie!!! 😀 Coop is enjoys spending time with his cousin Augustus. 🙂
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😊🐶🐶💕🌏🎄🎶
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I love this…really hit a note in my sentimental heart … memories of the beautiful garden my dear father had made for us to grow up in.
(I was today year’s old when I found out Nick Cave did a version of this song for his movie, Lawless! But I like what you have done here attaching it to this joy! 🙂 )
Love and blessings for your Christmas and New Year, Ivor
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Thank you kindly for your gracious words, Vanessa … and wishing you a lovely Christmas and grand New Year 😍🌏🤗🐶💕🐾🎄🌻
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❤ ❤
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May the memories within your heart live forever …💕
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You are so thoughtful…thank you xo
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You’re welcome my friend 😊💕🌏
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Delightful and insightful about children
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Thank you very much for thoughtful words, Derrick
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