
My Tanka, β2β of Five
FROM: Into The Light, Sunflower Tanka, Anthology
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Into the Moonlight (a Tanka)
Under the moonlight
On this starry starry night
I see moon shadows
Dancing upon the treetops
And bats doing the foxtrot
Ivor Steven (c) December 2024

A fun poem Ivor
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Thank you very much, Sadje ππΆππ
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Youβre welcome
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Nice. I was imagining the bats doing the foxtrot π
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Thank you kindly, Lakshmi
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Very clever and imaginative, dear Ivor. A lovely tanka made ever lovelier by the tunes of Cat Stevens. β‘πΆππ¦ππ―ββοΈπ
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Thank you kindly for your thoughtful words, Nancy β¦ lol, the Tanka format seems to suit my metaphysical imagination π€πππ»π
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HA! Sweet! π Such a lovely and fun image! π
And your poem brings memories of a fave artist and fave musicians! π
(((HUGS))) πβ€οΈ
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Hello dear, Carolyn, I hope you have had a wonderful Christmas Day with your family ππ€π β¦ and thank you for your lovely words about my whimsical poem πππΆππ»π
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We had THE most wonderful day (and days before Christmas)! π
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I hope you all had a lovely Christmas! π
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Our family Christmas get together will go through to Monday 30th πππππΆπΆπ
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Yes, ours will, too. ‘Til Jan 1st! π
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This one is such fun, Ivor
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Thank you for your delightful comments, Robbie ππΆππΆππ
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Delightful
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Thank you Derrick
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Imagination was wonderful
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The moon is always inspiring π
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