Today’s Throwback Friday poem was “my debut poem for Coffee House Writers Magazine,” published on July 13th, 2021. So, I have now been a writer with the Magazine for 4 years, which means I have had over 100 poems published in the Coffee House Writers Magazine.
>> Ivor Steven, Author at Coffee House Writers
The poem also appears in my third book, Until Eyes Hear Sound, Chapter 1, Little Creatures and Birds.
Silence and Shyness
I hear the digital clock’s shyness
My unruffled day feels timeless
Alone and listening to the silence
Of the muzzled arctic breeze
A quiet zephyr’s foreboding freeze
I hear the garden snail’s widow
Sliding up the kitchen window
Her silvery trail grates and slithers
Along the cold pane’s dirty rivers
I hear an earthworm digging
His defiant endeavors are deafening
Blindly shoveling the muddy ground
A dark burrow where he cannot be found
Ivor Steven (c) July 2025

I am left wondering if you just dropped some acid- as that is the only time in my life my hearing was acute enough to hear earthworms! hehehehe
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Haha … it’s super quiet here in my little courtyard … 😊😍🌏
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Wow! 4 years. Congrats. I remember this one.
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Thank you VJ and it ok for my debut for the Magazine 📖😊
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Welcome
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Congratulations Ivor. A very unique poem
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Thank you so much for your very kind words, Sadje 😊😍📖
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Of course my friend 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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This is an amazing verse, dear Ivor, and also doubles as a really cool rap! Give it a try …. I think you’ll agree, yo! 🥰🎶😎
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Oh … I didn’t think of it being a ‘rap’ … I’ll give it a try, although I’m no ‘rapper’ … I think you might be right !!! … haha… a rap song about a widowed snail and a blind worm 🪱🐌
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You just might have a big hit on your hands, dear Ivor! 😂🎶
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Frankie didn’t like my ‘rap’ … 🐶😎
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“Woof woof! Ah-hoo! Stop it now, Ivor! I’m trying to sleep! AH-HOO!!”
🥰🐶😮🌝🎶😎🌏
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🐶🎶😴
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this is lovely and so nice to read your debut poem, you were always a natural poet –
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Thank you for your wonderful compliments, Beth 📖😊😍🌏
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Everything hides away in the cold months!
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Even more so as I grow older my friend …
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I understand!
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Wonderful poem and congratulations on 4 years and 100 poems. 👏🏻
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Thank you for your kind words and support 📖😊🌏
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always
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What a beautiful ponderable poem, Ivor! Filled with brilliant rhymes, vivid images igniting our senses, and reminding us that even the smallest creatures, in our massive universe, are so important. 🙂
OH! and congrats on 4 years and 100 poems! Wow! 🥳
(((HUGS))) ❤️🐌❤️🪱❤️ (snail and worm 🙂 )
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Congrats on your milestone, Ivor! An impressive accomplishment. 💖
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Thank you very much, Eugi … it has been an enjoyable experience for me and I was their first international writer to gain a position on their team 📖😊🌏
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You’re welcome, Ivor!
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Reflections of morning silence, amazing poem.
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Thank you very much for your kind words 📖😊🌏
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