Discreetly Reflective


Inspired by one of Derrick Knight’s quietly atmospheric New Forest photos — which he kindly allows me to use on my poetry site >>https://derrickjknight.com/2026/01/19/decidedly-damp-2/ — this piece reflects the stillness and subtle depth held in a simple pond.

Discreetly Reflective


Discreetly, here I casually lie,
My opalescent veneer
Facing the weathered sky –
Reflective is my exterior.

Underneath, at the bottom of the weir,
A shallow coldness protects my fear
Of overexposure
To the New Forest’s frontier.
But being a reflective mirror
Is my theatrical nature



Music:“Elegy” by Lisa Gerrard & Patrick Cassidy — a quiet echo of the pond’s stillness.




Ivor Steven ©  January 2026

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

34 thoughts on “Discreetly Reflective”

    1. Thank you, and it’s an enjoyable process when I write a poem using Derrick’s fabulous photos, Robbie. Our collaborative Book “Perceptions” is wonderful collection of our joint ‘Articles’ …

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  1. You and Derrick always make a fabulous artistic team…his photos and your poems, Ivor! 🙂 And that music completes this perfect trio! 🙂
    Derrick takes such amazing and beautiful reflection photos!
    Your poem here, Ivor, is brilliant…and it evokes deep feelings within.
    (((HUGS))) ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Thank you for all of your lovely comments, Carolyn … and it’s always an honour to write a poem about Derrick’s wonderful photos … 📘💙💛🌝🌏💚

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