An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
Author: ivor20
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
Weekly Word Prompt: Subliminal click to view all the responses to this weeks word prompts
For the weekly word prompt “Subliminal” I’m reposting this old poem of mine “A Single Atom”, which I originally created from a very mixed up and vague dream I had when I was experiencing a lot of guilt complexes about a new relationship I was having at the time, only a year after my wifes passing. My subconscious was subtly injecting doubts into my mind during my sleep !!
A Single Atom
I see a shooting star, traverse the full-moon
Like a jungle bushfire, raging out of sight
I feel the heat of midday, smothering the night
Like a warm body, inside her tomb
I see the dawn, without the golden sun
Like a Lyrebird, singing all out of tune
I hear the morning rain, without a cloud in the sky
Like yesterdays floods, leaving her high and dry
I see a sandy beach, awash by a tidal wave
Like a burning desert, water is her grave
I fill lonely sheets, with empty dreams
Like a dark chasms’ irrelevant beams
I see a summer leaf, wilted by a frosty Autumn
Like an unwatered orchid, opening to an old anthem
I feel like a splintered heart, inside a single atom
An insightful and thought provoking poem by my dear friend Jane of janebasilblog . “Together We Can Help”. Please take the time to read her words and add your comments. “Let Us Not Be Silent” https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2018/07/01/let-us-not-be-silent/
Dimpled fingers
that reeked of crayon and ink,
riffled the fat book whose images depicted
thin children with unfamiliar skin-tones
from different races.
Blatant deprivation
is not pretty. The charity knew this.
Skin was scrubbed and wrapped in clean clothing.
The touched-up, sunrise smiles of these cute kids
seduced even the school-yard bully.
We each paid
our fisted shilling and took an image home.
Girls chose girls, and all knew which boys
were school-yard romance material
by what gender they selected.
It felt virtuous;
saving the children of the world
at the cost of a shilling.
My own photograph girl
boasted exotic black-sheep curls,
milky cocoa skin, ebony eyes that, even
through the monochrome, looked as if the whites
had been soaked in my my mother’s bag blue.
Her smile suggested a regular pastime
of birthday treats, an ignorance
of hunger and misuse.
This is my first attempt at writing a Villanelle style of poem. As a beginner, I took the easy way out and restructured one of my old poems, and actually I’ve wanted to revise this old classic of mine, the poem was originally called “This Lost Shadow”, and dear Shefali of writtenframes ,inspired/prompted me to try to write one. I’m not sure if I’ve got the Villanelle style technically ok, so please, I’m open to any suggestions and corrections to my effort here.
I’m singing this song about a single weeping tree
Why am I so sleepy, am I ageing too quickly
I’m writing that book for a soul gone cold
I’m so physically worn and mentally at sea
Why am I so anxious and lonely
I’m singing this song about a single weeping tree
I’m writing a song about my return to the fold
Why am I so sore, have I lost my plea
I’m writing that book for a soul gone cold
I’m a furnace log, burning up with glee
I’m a sinking ship, all about to flee
I’m writing this song about a single weeping tree
I’m an overburdened camel, not to be told
I’m an empty desert, a void, far as the eye can see
I’m writing that book for a soul gone cold
I’m a broken branch, withering and dying, oh so slowly
I’m this lost shadow, wandering this barren land furtively
I’m singing this song about a single weeping tree
I’m writing that book for a soul gone cold
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
Thank you to dear Shefali for her wonderful encouragement and invaluable assistance, and if you would like to have a try at a Villanelle here’s a very good “How To” link, A link to help you : https://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Villanelle
It’s award time, beautiful people! The Sunshine Blogger Award comes to me from Dancia at.https://danicapiche.com and her wonderful site, Living a Beautiful Life Thank you, Dancia! I am honored. Please visit her if you’re not already following her blog — she is indeed the essence of sunshine.
The Sunshine Blogger Award recognizes bloggers who inspire positivity and joy.
What are the rules for The Sunshine Blogger Award?
Thank the blogger who nominated you for the award and link to their blog.
List the rules and include The Sunshine Blogger Award logo in your post.
Answer the 11 Questions asked of you.
Write a new list of 11 Questions for your Nominees.
Nominate 11 bloggers for The Sunshine Blogger Award.
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11 Questions Asked of Me:
.What is happiness to you?
Home and love
What is one place you love visiting?
Ocean Grove surf beach, sun, golden sand and surf, that’s perfection.
What is your favorite comfort food?
An egg & bacon roll at my Football Club on game days, with a few beers !!
What is the best advice about life you’ve received?
Probably best explained in this little poem of mine, “I Do Thee Shine” When I was little and young. “Your heart will always shine” Said Mum. When I grew up, a know-all teenager. Head strong, and an all-night rager. “Your love of life will shine through” Said Dad. Later on I married, so happy and glad. Suddenly, one spring, MS touched her bad. The shining dulled and time turned sad. Dad said, “Your heart shone through”. And Mum said, “Her Star will always shine on you”. My Star, my Dad and Mum, you are my spine. For you, I do thee shine. What is your favorite song at the moment?
I’ve hundreds of fav’s, mainly by, Leonard Cohen, but the one I’m playing at the moment, is by Nick Cave, “To Be By Your Side”
What have you been wanting to do and haven’t yet?
Travel, especially to America and Philadelphia.
What would you teach a class or person tomorrow, if you had to?
To be kind and have compassion
What did you dream of as a child?
To grow up to bo as good as my dad
What habit would you like to quit?
I’d like to stop crying as much as I do, “How many rivers of tears must we cry, before all the deepest wells run dry”
Where do you get your blogging inspiration?
Most of my poems emanate from my dreams
What is one interesting or weird thing about you that most people don’t know?
Since my stroke, as I’m aging, tiredness sometimes overwhelms me, and then I suffer anxiety and have panic attack because I’m feeling inadequate.
If anyone would like to participate and answer the above questions, please do, and as I feel I might be imposing on my fellow bloggers, I won’t be nominating anyone.
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A huge THANK YOU to everyone who follows, comments, likes or quietly tours my blog.
I truly appreciate every one of you.
Ivor.Plumber/Poet 