I’ve seen the universe, through to the stars beyond
There’s a deep darkness, she’s gone, she’s gone
I saw her smile, crack from the pain
There was a sorrow, she caught it tomorrow
I’ve seen the moon, through the burning sun
Where’s that planet, she’s walking on
I saw her eyes, crying tears of sand
Where’s that beach, she’s lying on
I’ve seen the ocean, through the broken coral
Where’s that ship, she’s sailing on
I saw her body, serene and frail
Where the ashes, she’s covered in
I’ve seen the earth open up, swallowing the multitude whole.
Where’s that chasm, she’s falling through.
I saw her gentle soul, disappear out of sight.
Where’s that secret heaven, she’s flying to
I’ve seen the land, go through violent storms
Where’s the winds of time, she’s spread upon
I saw her heart, her love, for all of you, and I
Where’s that dream, she’s left us to find
Ivor Steven (c) 2018

so sweet, really love this Ivor .. chin up, Monday surely should bring some news 🙂
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Yes, the camera procedure is this afternoon, I’m fasting at the moment
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oh what fun you are having …know a veteran who swallowed a few dolls eyes so they would see something looking back at them …
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Very funny Kate 🤗😊
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yes he was very funny … anything for a laugh from these sailors 😉
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Will not be long now until they have some results for you. They can then start to repair what is wrong. Thinking of you Ivor!
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Lovely as usual. Your writing takes me to another world. Love it.
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Thank you ❤️Claudia, it’s one of my favourite poems xxxx
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From whence does such poetic essence come from?
The answer is within
the heart and soul
upon the Spirit wind.
Glorious writing, Ivor
. . . my friend.
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Maybe because I’m fasting
Now I’m hungry for the truth
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The occasional fast
is good for giving
the body, soul,
and spirit, a blast.
As they say . . .
this too shall pass.
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Fasting, as a wilderness
thing, brings us closer to
the spiritual source of all.
Away from earthly, bodily,
material things … a good
place to pray, and interface
with divine love, truth
. . . and grace.
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Wonderful Ivor dear.<3
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Thank you Laleh, I’m afraid my camera heart procedure he
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My pleasure.❤️
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Has been put off til tomorrow, very disappointing. Xxx
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Awww ❤️❤️❤️
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I have seen the beauty of your soul my dear friend. It is your poetry. 😊
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Beautiful poetry, hope you are better now? Best wishes Anie
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Thank you Dear Anie 🤗☺️
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Absolutely beautiful Ivor :O) x
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Thank you Lisa, the poem is one of my old fav’s
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I think this is one of my favorites Ivor. ❤
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So poignant and SO sweet! Amazing write, Ivor!
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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One of my favourite poems ogCarolyn
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Beautiful poetry Ivor! I strolled each line where you had gone so tenderly…
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I’m pleased you enjoyed my poem, and comments mean a lot to me
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