My Universe

Inside the clouds

Comes the secret of the rain

Outside, the sky

Reflects the ocean’s colouring veins

Within the sun

Burst, undying corona rays

Overhead, the moon

Casts shadows night and day

Underneath, there’s the earth

Orbiting, in charge of seasonal change

Nearby, there’s Venus and Mars

Planets without smog and cars

Above, there’s the stars

The universe’s infinite mountain range

 

Featured Image: Pinterest.

 

Ivor Steven (c)Β  June 2019

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

22 thoughts on “My Universe”

  1. We have had a very wet winter so far this year, here in Adelaide. Our water tanks, of which we have many, are overflowing for the first time in ages. So its rainwater freshness for us while it lasts. Maybe it has headed your way from here

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  2. So beautiful, Ivor! Your images are vivid!
    I must say…I am so fortunate to be a small part of THE Universe…
    and Thank You for letting me be a small part of Your Universe! πŸ™‚
    HUGS!!! πŸ™‚ 🌝 🌟 🌍 🌞 🌚 ⭐️ 🌌 πŸ™‚

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  3. Reflects the ocean’s colouring veins! Love that line and love this poem – I’m star struck! πŸ™‚

    Can I ask? The other day you mentioned re scheduling your posts. And yes they turned up refreshed on the reader. Today I inadvertently backdated our post BUSY on weekly prompts. I changed the date to today but it’s still showing up on the reader with yesterday’s posts. How do you do yours? Thanks Ivor

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