Here I am re-posting a poem that I recently submitted to be published, however the piece didn’t get accepted, and later on today, I’m going to present this poem on “Go Dog Go Cafe’s” ‘Throwback Friday’ weekly category … but firstly, I’m posting “My Sunrise” here on my site…
My Sunrise
I’ve walked a thousand lonely miles
Looking for her everlasting smile
Gradually scaling Ararat’s steepest cliff
There, sipping from the grail’s cup of youth
I’ve travelled to the edge of time
To find the final word of rhyme
Where my sunrise soared into the sky
To recapture her last goodbye
Then I crawled on my hands
Searching for that broken line in the sand
I’ve dug myself a hole, deep into space
To join her spirit and grace
Releasing my star into the universe
And I awoke, to write more of this verse
Ivor Steven (c) Feb 2018
A lovely, heartfelt poem, Ivor. Love the references to Mt. Ararat and the grail! I found the second verse exquisitely beautiful. And I think most women would be happy to be remembered for their “spirit and grace.” ❤ Take care, Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl for lovely comments… lots of memories flooding my thoughts over the these weeks, wedding anniversary, and in a couple of days it’ll be 20 years ago when I had my first stroke…
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I know that the stroke anniversary weighs on your mind. I had a mild heart attack 13 years ago, and that fact is always in the back of my mind. I also have two stents in my heart and have had carotid artery surgery. We are mortal! Your light shines in your work, Ivor. ❤ Cheryl
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It’s nice to be among understanding friends, thank you Cheryl.. 😀😊
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Beautiful 🇦🇺 💖
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Thank you Nikki…😍
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Loved it!! Perfect australia 🇦🇺 ❤
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❤️❤️❤️
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This is so touching Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje…. 💙💓🌏
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You’re welcome
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It remains very beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you Sue … 😊💙💓
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Lovely poem
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Thank you… 😀😊
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Beautiful as always. 💕💕💕
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Thank you Fiery… sorry if I don’t get to poem tonight… I’m tired and emotional.. 😊😍😉
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Aw… no worries, dear. Poetry is going nowhere 💗
Feel better xx
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Such a brilliant, heartfelt, lovely poem, Ivor! I got teary-eyed. 🙂
She will always be your sunrise and she will always shine on you AND in you. 🙂
Well, gosh darn, I can’t imagine why anyone wouldn’t accept this poem for publication!!! 😮 😦 Something wrong with those people!
Perfect photo, poem, and song trio, Ivor!
You know I always enjoy Hozier!
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Thank you for your your kindness…. and I will try again with this piece somewhere !!….. at the moment, I’m tired and emotional (that’s Ivor)… ((Hugs))
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Another fine tribute, Ivor
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Thank you Derrick…
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Lovely and very touching, Ivor!
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Thank you Eugenia, and yes originally written during my rehad time.. 😊🌏
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You’re welcome!
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A truly movingly poignantly evoked heartrending piece. Very well crafted
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Thank you d.a. . I find these pieces are comforting for my soul 😊💜🌏
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Yes I can see that
The writing in such a way is a soothing balm ❤😊
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A very nice nostalgic write, Ivor. I loved the digging a hole in the universe to join her…
Dwight
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Thank you Dwight… I find writing these nostalgic poems are soothing for my soul….
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I can understand that! It is great therapy…
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I love this Ivor! Its beautiful! 🙂
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It has found its place Ivor. Hozier, always enjoy his music his home is in the next county from where I live.
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He’s a great singer/songwriter Chris…
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For sure.
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