This week the Wednesday Challenge from Weekly Prompts is: THE UNEXPECTED
Please visit there fabulous site by clicking > HERE … And my poem below was a totally “Unexpected” philosophical piece from a few of my ‘scattered’ thoughts today …
Life In Mime
We do spend a lifetime
Trying to make our lives rhyme
But truth is scattered with our lifeβs crimes
Of how we didnβt take the honest climb
And our protest words were only in mime
Against the inhumane pantomime of mankind
Ivor Steven (c) June 2021
Nick Cave & The Dirty Three-Time Jesum Transeuntum Et Non Riverentum. Lyrics
[Verse 1]
We were called to the forest… when we went down
A wind blew warm and eloquent
We were searching for the secrets of the universe…
And we rounded up demons and forced them to tell us what it all meant
We tied ’em to trees and broke them down one by one
And on a scrap of paper, they wrote these words…
And as we read them, the sun broke through the trees…
“Dread the passage of Jesus, for he will not return.”
[Verse 2]
Then we headed back to our world and left the forest behind…
Our hearts singin’ with all the knowledge of love
Then somewhere, somehow, we lost the message along the way…
And when we got home, we bought ourselves a house
And we bought a car that we did not use…
And we bought a cage and two singing birds…
And at night we’d sit and listen to the canary’s song
For we’d both run right out of words…
Now the stars, they are all angled wrong…
And the sun and the moon refuse to burn
But I remember a message in a demon’s hand
Dread the passage of Jesus for he does not return…
…he does not return…
…he does not return..

Oh so true.
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Thank you Sadje πππ
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Of course π
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Some potent philosophical questions here Ivor…
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Iβm not sure how I came to these thoughts, but I wrote them down ππππ
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Wonderful philosophical question about being honest with ourselves. Beautifully penned!
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Thank you Annette … questions I ask of myself ?? I wonder about the answers ??
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Powerful questions
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Yes indeed Derrick ππ
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Wonderful piece!
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Thank you πππ
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Most welcome!
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That’s right!!
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Thank you ππ
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Maybe it’s only a metaphor…but an actual one. When I stopped trying to make my words (life?) rhyme, things (my writing) felt better (life?). π€·π»ββοΈ
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A beautifully accurate metaphor Colleen … yeah … we are not the ship, we are only the pilot …
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So true Ivorπππ
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Thank you Mich .. ππ
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I like your questions Ivor and I thank you for taking part in our challenge. π
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Always my pleasure Sue ππ
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Thank you, Ivor π
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Important powerful questions, Ivor. Wowza.
Excellent photos, poem, and song/vid trio, too.
(((HUGS)))
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Thank you Carolyn .. my thoughts turned into words a piece of philosophy πππ€
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What an honest beautiful poem! Absolutely loved it.
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thank you Pragalbha … my scattered thoughts gathered into these words, and a poem flowed … I am so pleased you appreciated my piece of philosophy… ππ
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My pleasure, it is truly rich.
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Positives from being in lockdown …
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That mix of good and evil in the end comes back to haunt us!
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Thank you Dwight … I’m not much of a philosopher, but my thoughts seemed worthy enough to write down …
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I would say you do very well as a philosopher!! :>)
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Ivor, lies are unpleasant, but lying to yourself is tragic! Sometimes, as so eloquently expressed in your poem, we engage in a “pantomime.” If we haven’t made an honest effort, we are deceiving ourselves. Great post! β€
Take care! enjoy your weekend!
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Thank you Cheryl for your thoughtful comments .. Iβll be staying warm at home for the weekend, itβs going to be a cold one π₯Άπ
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Hopefully, the cold won’t last too long! 3 >3
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Thought-provoking. β₯.
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Thank you Niki βΊοΈπ
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