in my hazy bedroom
it is unexplainable
what I say to the moon
and there is that secret
unknowable connection
an unmistakable tune
received in an echoing response
from my unattainable moon
Ivor Steven (c) January 2022
in my hazy bedroom
it is unexplainable
what I say to the moon
and there is that secret
unknowable connection
an unmistakable tune
received in an echoing response
from my unattainable moon
Ivor Steven (c) January 2022
For sure you commune with the moon! π perhaps we all do?
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He listens to my every word .. just like Frankie πΆπ
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and the moon is a wonderful listener
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I agree ππ
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Nice poem Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje ππ
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Youβre welcome my friend
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Lovely poem, Ivor. Somehow, when I wake up in the middle of the night and go out and look at the sky, seeing the moon there lets me know all is well. I go back to sleep.
All the best to you and Frankie as you commune with the moon! β€ β€ β€
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Excellent Ivor. I loved this poem! β€
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Thank you Colleen .. πππ
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Ooh, this is excellent! You know I love the moon! π Your photo, poem, and song trio are over the moon, Ivor! π I enjoy talking to the moon. Such a good listener. π Never interrupts. Never gives bad advice. Always makes me feel heard, comforted, loved. π
(((HUGS))) π
PS…I’ve written a few poems about the moon. π
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I think itβs a new moon π on the 2nd Feb .. and he is full of listening then .. between talking to the moon and talking to Frankie during the day.. I am always occupied in conversation .. and then thereβs Oscar the owl π¦, and the happy Penguin Phillip π§ and I have a new little friend Sammie the snail π β¦ I have a poem about him, but thatβs at CHW for next weekβs magazine βDo Snails Go To The Ballet?
((Hugs)) π€ and Woof woof for Coops from Frankie
PS β¦ I need a new hankie each time listen to the Bruno Mars πΆππ
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HA! Yes, I can relate! I chatter away to so many things in nature, and to Coops, and to inanimate objects even. π I find it fun! π
YAY for Sammie! Can’t wait to read his poem! I think snails DO go to the ballet! π
Coop says Thanks, Frankie! π And sends woofs and pats and rubs back!
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I think the moon has been very kind to those who trust it.
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I think ‘trust’ is my middle name Colleen
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It’s a good middle name for you Ivor π
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I go with the sun. The sun gives all life to the world. It is always cheerful, providing optimistic feelings to any who require. The sun will burn out the moon when it expands in size, billions of years in the future.
— Catxman
http://www.catxman.wordpress.com
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It is indeed a beautiful connection to have with the Moon.
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Thank you Pragalbha… I suppose it’s about needing someone to talk to, and to listen …
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You are welcome. The moon offers all that beautifully.
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There’s that man in the moon, and, maybe, you will, get that, response from him, who knows???
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Lovely poem, I love watching moon from my window⦠such a great sensation!
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Your words, your song strike a cord so true Ivor.
Good night moon, Good night Ivor, Good night Bruno
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Slleep soundly and dream well … πππ
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There is something magical about the moon. π
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I was trying to capture that aura .. Thanks Sue
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Such a mystery
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I love how to depict that magical moon.
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Thank you for reading πππ
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An inspirational poem, and one of my favorite moon “shots”!
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Thank you Claudia ππππ
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Lovely poem, Ivor…
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Thank you Navin, I appreciate your kindness ππ
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You’re welcome Ivor π«
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All our talks and secrets are safely kept with moon π
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Thank you for reading … and there’s no arguements about that from me or the moon … ππ
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Some conversations with our friends up in the sky are too sacred π
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Yes .. heβs a good listener πππ
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Nice!
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Thank you for reading
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A pleasure.
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I like the visual half-rhyming of “moon” with all those un-words. Adds to the mystery.
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Thank you Rachel .. the moon’s a wonderful listener ..
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