Over at Go Dog Go Cafe’s, Throwback Friday segment, I posted my revised poem, “Below An Alien Sky”

Originally this poem was called “Below A Loyal Sky”, but today I have slightly revised, the July 2018 piece, for today’s article.
Below An Alien Sky (Revised)
I hide behind a mask
You’ll hear me ask
At the veil sales
Lurking in the back pews
Sneaking a view
Through a curtain of bamboo
Below the indigo-blue sky
I am just a loyal alien spy
Protecting my Prussian blue eyes
Ivor Steven (c) May 2018
G’day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I’m an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I’ve been blogging for over 4 years, and writing poems for 20 years. Of course a lot of my poems are…
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lovely post behind the veil with a great song Ivor..
Happy Fun Fri-Yay!
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Thank you Cindy
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you’re so welcome Ivor!
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I agree, its a nice post.
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An intriguing poem, Ivor: I didn’t realise you were part alien! 😅 👽
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🌏👽 … we are here to save the planet
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Thank Goodness! The Homo Sapiens don’t seem at all bothered about it… 🌏
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Yes .. they seem quite oblivious about their own deteriorating environment 🕵️🌏😊
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Sadly, yes…
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Absolutely great
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Thank you Wlllow 🌏😊💕🕵️
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💜💜
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Words that arouse a curiosity as to what’s behind the ominous skies, Ivor.
Nicely written … I enjoyed the video. Good song. Have a very restful weekend …
Isadora 😎
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Thank you for reading my curious and inquisitive poem .. about feeling like an alien on this planet we are destroying 🌏😊💕
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This is so great, Ivor!
And another of your ponderful poems that should produce concern and action from those of us who read. A powerful pairing with Dennis’ song. “Feeling like an alien…like a stranger lately”…in our world/society is something I’ve always felt, but even more so the past 7 years or so.
(((HUGS)))
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Thank you Carolyn … yes I was pondering .. feeling like an alien on my own planet 🌏 .. or is it my planet .. surely what I am witnessing cannot be real .. and I must be an alien spy🕵️ .. who is frightened by what he sees 😊🌏💕
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I can so relate. And what a creative perspective to poet-about. 🙂
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And it’s a poem I wrote 4 years ago …looks I’m always pondering 🤔
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Being ponderful is a good thing. 🙂 🤔
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😋😊🌏
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A fun poem Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje ..
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You’re welcome
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Okay, I am in love with the song!!! You do know that your posts have introduced me to so many amazing songs!
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I am pleased you are enjoying my song choices … I love exploring YouTube for suitable songs to go with my poems .. 🎵💛🌏🤗
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Ah yes! And thank you sharing them here! 🙂
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My pleasure
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So very good. I feel like I say the same thing over and over to you. I just love the way your poetry makes me feel. ❤
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The older I become the more I feel I don’t belong… just like an alien! 🙂
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Yes!! … sometimes I feel like that too Sue
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