Over at Go Dog Go Cafeβs, Throwback Friday segment, I posted my revised poem, “Below An Alien Sky”

Originally this poem was called βBelow A Loyal Skyβ, but today I have slightly revised, the July 2018 piece, for todayβs article.
Below An Alien Sky (Revised)
I hide behind a mask
Youβll hear me ask
At the veil sales
Lurking in the back pews
Sneaking a view
Through a curtain of bamboo
Below the indigo-blue sky
I am just a loyal alien spy
Protecting my Prussian blue eyes
Ivor Steven (c) May 2018
Gβday, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. Iβm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. Iβve been blogging for over 4 years, and writing poems for 20 years. Of course a lot of my poems areβ¦
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lovely post behind the veil with a great song Ivor..
Happy Fun Fri-Yay!
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Thank you Cindy
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you’re so welcome Ivor!
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I agree, its a nice post.
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An intriguing poem, Ivor: I didnβt realise you were part alien! π π½
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ππ½ … we are here to save the planet
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Thank Goodness! The Homo Sapiens donβt seem at all bothered about itβ¦ π
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Yes .. they seem quite oblivious about their own deteriorating environment π΅οΈππ
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Sadly, yesβ¦
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Absolutely great
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Thank you Wlllow ππππ΅οΈ
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Words that arouse a curiosity as to what’s behind the ominous skies, Ivor.
Nicely written … I enjoyed the video. Good song. Have a very restful weekend …
Isadora π
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Thank you for reading my curious and inquisitive poem .. about feeling like an alien on this planet we are destroying πππ
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This is so great, Ivor!
And another of your ponderful poems that should produce concern and action from those of us who read. A powerful pairing with Dennis’ song. “Feeling like an alien…like a stranger lately”…in our world/society is something I’ve always felt, but even more so the past 7 years or so.
(((HUGS)))
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Thank you Carolyn β¦ yes I was pondering .. feeling like an alien on my own planet π .. or is it my planet .. surely what I am witnessing cannot be real .. and I must be an alien spyπ΅οΈ .. who is frightened by what he sees πππ
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I can so relate. And what a creative perspective to poet-about. π
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And itβs a poem I wrote 4 years ago β¦looks Iβm always pondering π€
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Being ponderful is a good thing. π π€
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A fun poem Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje ..
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Youβre welcome
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Okay, I am in love with the song!!! You do know that your posts have introduced me to so many amazing songs!
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I am pleased you are enjoying my song choices … I love exploring YouTube for suitable songs to go with my poems .. π΅πππ€
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Ah yes! And thank you sharing them here! π
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My pleasure
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So very good. I feel like I say the same thing over and over to you. I just love the way your poetry makes me feel. β€
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The older I become the more I feel I donβt belongβ¦ just like an alien! π
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Yes!! … sometimes I feel like that too Sue
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