An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
A Hard Floor
Today I am presenting another poem that I wrote while attending a “Writing Circle” Zoom meeting on Sunday morning, hosted by the talented and gracious, Ali Grimshaw … If you are interested in attending one of her fabulous on-line “Zoom Sessions”, you can visit her site by clicking on this link >> https://flashlightbatteries.blog/
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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34 thoughts on “A Hard Floor”
I love your alliteration and assonance here, Ivor: it works so well!
We only have 7 mins to write the poem .. here’s my polished poem, but basically the same ..
the last 2 lines have been altered to give it the alliteration .. and yes I’m happy with the result 💕😊🌏
Powerful profound poem, Ivor. Great write! We can all relate. And that song is a perfect pairing. Fortunately, today…even when we are having to hibernate, we can still reach out and connect with people…we can be social even at a socially acceptable distance. 😊
(((HUGS))) 😊
I love your alliteration and assonance here, Ivor: it works so well!
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We only have 7 mins to write the poem .. here’s my polished poem, but basically the same ..
the last 2 lines have been altered to give it the alliteration .. and yes I’m happy with the result 💕😊🌏
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Oh wow! This is such a profound poem Ivor
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Thank you Sadje…yes ‘Covid’ has had us hibernating, but things are going to the same for a few more years I think 😊🌏💕
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You’re right Ivor.
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Powerful profound poem, Ivor. Great write! We can all relate. And that song is a perfect pairing. Fortunately, today…even when we are having to hibernate, we can still reach out and connect with people…we can be social even at a socially acceptable distance. 😊
(((HUGS))) 😊
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Thank you Carolyn … Yes .. but I wearying .. and now there’s no difference between the hard floors 😊🌏🤗💙
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I understand. 🙂
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Congrats on 2,400 followers Ivor and love your poem! 💖
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Wow .. have I that many .. no wonder I can’t keep up 🤗😀.. thank you for following my poems Cindy 🌏💕
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hahahahha I know the feeling well.. Pleasure! 💖
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You needed a soft rug! 🙂
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Yeah .. a soft rug and cuddles .. 😊
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This is a reality in poetry. Storms and sitting on hard floors. Though poetic, it resonates in reality!
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Nicely done Sir!
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Thank you Walt ..
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My pleasure
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Thanks Colleen … we don’t get much time … the words just fall from instant thoughts … and I suppose that is what makes my words real ..
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I like the process of it.
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love the alliteration
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Thanks Beth .. 😊😎
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ouch the turmoil of life … well written and so profound!
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Thank you Kate .. 🤗🌏😏
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thank you Ivor!
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Splendid metaphors
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Thank you Derrick
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A thought-provoking piece, Ivor! Life is full of challenges.
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Yes indeed Eugenia .. 😊🌏
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I was hoping the next floor would be a little softer!
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No such luck Dwight 😊🌏
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Ha ha! :>)
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Hi
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This is gorgeous, Ivor! I can’t write my name in 7 minutes! 🙂 Greetings to Frankie! ❤
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Haha .. yep .. it’s a bit of a challenge for my old mind ..
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