G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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I love this poem, especially the next-to-the-last verse! ❤ The angry glare may come from one of those shallow souls who think it's all about them! 🙂 Keep on musing and writing, Ivor! ❤ ❤ ❤
“…next ex before the why…” is brilliant, creative and a great twisty twist! 🙂 What a wonderful poem, Ivor!
These days I’m sure all of us find ourselves, occasionally, staring out into space thinking, wondering…oopy if a person gets in between our eyes and space. HA! 😀 We are not staring at them and we mean no harm. 🙂
(((HUGS)))
Haha … it’s not a good look .. thank vacant stare.. . which was me at the Cafe yesterday .. and I wrote this poem then and there, and I was pleased with how my thoughts drifted into the second part of the poem .. I am finding Michelle Gurevich’s music almost additive to listen to .. 😉🎵🤗😍 😎
Wonderful post and the music shared
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Thank you Tanvir
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Interesting questions posed here Ivor!
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Yes I like doing that .. ??😊💕
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YES!
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YES
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good questions
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The answer is .. x y z
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It does get embarrassing when you get caught staring. An interesting poem Ivor.
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A poem I wrote at cafe .. and yes I was blankly staring into a void
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Ha… summer daydreams!
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Yes
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Love it! 🙂
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Thanks Sue 😊🌏
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I love this poem, especially the next-to-the-last verse! ❤ The angry glare may come from one of those shallow souls who think it's all about them! 🙂 Keep on musing and writing, Ivor! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank You Cheryl … I really enjoyed the wording of this piece .. and the finale twist 💕😊🌏
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Wonderful play on words.
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Thank you Sadje .. 💕😊🌏
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My pleasure
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Yes! I recognize that – not seeing the person right in front of me 🙂
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I think we all do the unintentional stare ..😉
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this is such a great poem Ivor.. I love it!! 💖👏👏👏
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Thank you kindly Cindy .. a piece of reality with a dreamy twist .. I’m thrilled how poem is being received .. 💕😊🌏
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Oh it’s a great twist which you know I love by my poetry!
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“…next ex before the why…” is brilliant, creative and a great twisty twist! 🙂 What a wonderful poem, Ivor!
These days I’m sure all of us find ourselves, occasionally, staring out into space thinking, wondering…oopy if a person gets in between our eyes and space. HA! 😀 We are not staring at them and we mean no harm. 🙂
(((HUGS)))
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Haha … it’s not a good look .. thank vacant stare.. . which was me at the Cafe yesterday .. and I wrote this poem then and there, and I was pleased with how my thoughts drifted into the second part of the poem .. I am finding Michelle Gurevich’s music almost additive to listen to .. 😉🎵🤗😍 😎
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That last line is brilliant, Ivor and I love the questions you ask.😊💙
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments Punam 🤗💚🌏
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Nicely zed, Ivor
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Clever reply Derrick …
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🙂
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Caught staring…:)
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I think we all have
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If I’m caught, I pretend not to…
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I really like this one Ivor.
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