In the misty rain
Remembering heavy clouds
Loaded full of tears
Ivor Steven (c) March 2022
In the misty rain
Remembering heavy clouds
Loaded full of tears
Ivor Steven (c) March 2022
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
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🥲🥲🥲
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I imagine even the clouds are loaded with tears right now 😳
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Thanks .. that’s how morning felt 🌏💙
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Deep and thoughts full lines penned
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Thank you Tanvir 🌏💙
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Always so meaningful Ivor.
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Thank you Ally
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My pleasure, Ivor. 🙂
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I imagine each rain drop as being explosive when it hits each separate puddle.
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Heavy and hard
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😔🌨️
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Awww
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all is sad and heavy right now Ivor!💖 beautiful song! 💖
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Thanks Cindy .. yes we need the clouds hanging over us to clear 🙂🌏☮️
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i do suppose so Ivor 💖
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Beautifully said!
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Thank you Pragalbha ☮️🌏💙
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Ivor, your lovely poem captures the anguish we are feeling. The beautiful photo and song complete a very poignant post.
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Thank you Cheryl.. our world is under a big heavy cloud .. hopefully our sky will be brighter soon 😁🌞☮️
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Very descriptive, these, tears of heaven, you described here…
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Thank you ☮🌏😥
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So sad – 😞
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It’s a sad world at the moment ☮️😢🌏
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It is, Ivor, very sad.
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Well said…
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Thank you Navin
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You’re welcome, Ivor
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Marvellous
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Thank you Derrick
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So descriptive of these turbulent times, Ivor. 😢
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Thank you Eugenia .. and it’s sadly so 🥲☮️🌏
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You’re welcome, Ivor!
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THe world should be completely saturated with tears right now.
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Sadly.. yes
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Perfect match of the song to your words, Ivor. Both just ooze the despair and hopelessness our world has contained within it right now. ((hugs))
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Thank you Susi .. I’d rather not write these sort of poems but world situation is confronting me every day 🥲☮️
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I understand, Ivor! ❤
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