My poem ‘Water-logged Boots, was published at FREE VERSE REVOLUTION, in November 2019, and thank you to the editor Kristiana for her kind consideration of my piece…
And today on Weekly Prompts the Weekend Challenge is: Boots . Please go over and visit their fabulous site by clicking >> Here . Appropriately in response to their prompt, I have reposted this poem from 3 years ago.
Water-logged Boots
Yes, I am small in this overburdened world
But I flutter freely when unfurled
I could be a family picture collage
Or a tiny squirrel amongst the foliage
On his journey of ups and downs
Collecting and storing his acorns
The trick is to enjoy the ups
While the floodgates are shut
Sometimes I did nearly drown
Other times I floated upside down
During the many seasonal rains
I wondered if I would ever swim again
So then I pretended to write a biblical book
Ignorantly thinking no-one would ever look
Afterwards, I thought I could walk on water
Then my boots became water-logged
And if you need to walk a mile in my shoes
You will have to learn how to swim and sing the blues
Ivor Steven (c) March 2022

love this metaphor poem
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Thank you Beth … an oldy but goody
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Love this, Ivor and I thank you joining in again with the challenge 🙂
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My pleasure Sue .. and i loved having the opportunity to repost this fav’ poem of mine .. 🌏🌝😍
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Shouldn’t you be asleep by now? 😀
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I’m on my way now 😊
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So lovely!
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Thank you Bridgette 🤗🌏
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So well written Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje .. a fav’ of mine 🤗🌏💕
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👍🏼💖
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A poem which encapsulates perfectly the ups and downs of life’s journey…
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Thank you Claudia .. yes the poem is an oldie but goodie .. and one of my fav’s
🤗🌏😍
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Love this little-throw back poem and the way it brings so much out of the experience of a water-logged boot in a creative way!
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Thank you Jaya .. and yes this one of my fav’s .. the water-logged boot 🥾 metaphor worked ok for me 😊😍🌏
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This poem hit so many notes. The metaphor, the image, the way it reflects the reality of life. An excellent piece Ivor. 👏 💚
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Thank you Cassa for your thoughtful comments 😊🌎
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a perfect poem depicted in of our life situations Ivor! 👏👏👏
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Thank you Cindy .. life is very much an imperfect journey 🌎🤗😊💕
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it so is!.. welcome! 💖🌻
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The unpredictability of life is beautifully expressed in your poem, Ivor. Some days are better than others. 🙂 🙂
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Thank you Cheryl .. and I am sure we all experience the ups and downs during our journey 🤗🌏
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Like this one Ivor and that song is so good too 🙂
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Thank you .. Nick Cave sings the blues well
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Ivor you are doing a great work! I appreciate it!
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Thank you Minjee
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Your welcome
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This is one of your very best poems in my opinion, Ivor. You have captured your life and many of ours as well! Congratulations on getting it published.
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Thank you Dwight .. I have to agree with you .. sometimes we get right 🤗🌏
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Yes! :>)
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Yes he did…
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Hi Ivor you haven’t texted me to apply to Hana bank helping program!
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Thank you Minjee .. If had some money I would invest it .. and probably self publish my book 📕😊🌏
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For this reason, you have to, read my blog on Hana Bank to help to meet your goal.
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I like the ‘how to’ instructions at the end. 🙂
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Thanks Colleen … is there a how to part, about going to bed … it’s 12.25 am here .. 😴
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Shhhhhh, lower the eye lids. Breath gently. Snore softly. Out. 🙂
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Thanks 😊😴
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You’re welcome.
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