A special poem I wrote, after I’d taken my Lady to hospital for the last time, on the day of her 65th birthday. ten years ago. Hello Carole, and I wonder if you still wonder that I wonder, wishing upon your celestial star…….
Under The Snow.
We emanate to a birthday.
We deflate to a final day.
Birthdays, they all come, they all go.
Birthdays, in the sunshine, under the snow.
Birthdays, slow to mature, quickly an aeon.
Birthdays, before we are born, after we are gone.
Birthdays, hanging on by a breath.
Birthdays, nailed to a cross ’til death.
What’s it all mean to be alive and cry.
What’s it all mean to live and to die.
Ivor Steven. (c) Β May 2022

so moving ivor! thanks for sharing! hugs! xx
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I wrote the poem seven years ago, and the words are still very emotional for me, xxxxxx
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I imagine they are, I think if I had written something with that much emotion attached to it it would be very emotional for me to read it back, you are brave to share
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I think the sharing is good therapy for me, βΊοΈπ€π€βΊοΈ
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I agree, itβs good therapy for all of us, and getting feedback is nice too I think
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I find it’s all good for me to talk about my life’s experiences, and maybe it will help someone else in a similar situation….
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Such a heart felt tribute to your late wife. π
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Thank you Beckie, it’s a powerful and emotional poem for me……xxx
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I can certainly see why. It must have been hard to write, I’m sure. π’
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Oh, I cried a lot, and the words flowed with the tears ππ
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a beautiful tribute, as always your words move me, i feel your loss Ivor, one that cannot be replaced, time just eases the passage till you meet again, I feel her smile when I read your words, like she has guided your hand.
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You’re quite right Gina, I see her smile and I feel her guidence, and my journey is so much smoother as the years go by… Thank you for your kindness xxx
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The emotion oozes from this, Ivor.
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Yes, V.J., I was oozind and seeping everywhere, while I wrote the words… xxx
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Understandably. Take care
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I think life is about the emotions we feel and the emotions we create. β€
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Yes I feel lots of deep emotions and that definitely helps me create my emotional poems .. xxx
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Life so so fleeting, but love is forever. She knows that and you know that too.
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So poignant
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Thank you Derrick
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Beautiful and poignant tribute!
(teary-eyes here)
Happy Birthday to Carole!
(((HUGS))) π
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She’s resting under some beautiful purple flowers today.
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Aw. π π
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Memories, memories wonderful to have, wonderful to share always the comfort.
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Ivor, my dear friend… What a lovely poem, coupled with a lovely photo of Carole and a heartfelt rendition of If It Be Your Will. Last Friday, the 12th, was the 16th anniversary of the passing of my wife Lee. Hugs & Love dear friend.
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Yes, we’ll never forget, they are in our hearts forever β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Indeed they are πβ€οΈ
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Great questions to ask of life and death!
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Thank you Dwight .. ππ
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These days that we originally, celebrated, became, the days we grieve theost, out of the year now.
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Thank you ππ .. and yes the irony of life ππ
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beautiful. happy birthday in heaven Carol. π
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Thank you dear Cindy ππππ€
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Reblogged this on Life On The Lake and commented:
Listen to the song as well. It is an emotional cry we’ve all felt.
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Thank you sincerely Phyllis for reblogging my special poem on your fabulous site ππ
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That is a lovely photo and deeply beautiful poem!
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Thank you Pragalbha.. ππππ
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Such poignancy Ivor
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Thank you Sadje ..π
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Youβre welcome
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So poignant, Ivor!
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Thank you Ingrid .. Iβm coping and going ok πππ€
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Glad to hear it π
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This is still immensely touching
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Yes .. indeed Derrick π
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a beautiful birthday ode to the sweet love of your life
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Thank you Beth .. her birthdays continue to be memorable π
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What a beautiful and heartfelt tribute, Ivor! β€οΈπΉ
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Thank you Eugenia. ..πππ
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A touching reflection and a beautiful tribute. The meaning of life is so defined by those we love.
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Our lives revolve around the ones we love Cheryl β¦ πππ Thank you Cheryl
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