A nightmarish hypothetical poem and some of the words are from comments I made on Bart’s and Sadje’s recent posts .. > https://bartbarkerpoet.com/2022/07/15/fraiku-first-lights/
.. > https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2022/07/13/one-liner-strength/
Featured Image: Photo from the JWST
Towards the Dark (my Nightmare)
One day soon
After mining the earth dry
There will no more rubies
No more diamonds in the sky
Will our silver spoons
Ever stop digging
Towards the dark side of our moon
Tonight, we do not need
Our world to be darker
We can learn to survive
When life teaches us
The value of being alive
Ivor Steven (c) July 2022

Amazing 💜
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Thank you Willow 🌓🤗🌏💕
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💜💜
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A poignant and thought provoking poem Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje .. a couple of comments and few lines of my own.. the piece seemed to work ok 🌓🌏🤗
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You’re so good at this.
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Thanks Sadje .. I enjoy the Challenge 🤗💕
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You’re most welcome
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Amazing, ivor
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Thank You Beth 🌓🌏🤗
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I really like your closing thought here, Ivor!
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Thank you Dwight.. . something positive from beyond the dark
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Yes! You are welcome!
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A powerful, poignant poem, Ivor. I like the ending, too. 🙂
We must appreciate being alive.
(((HUGS))) ❤️ 🙂
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Thank you Carolyn… I suppose we all worry about the dark side of ourselves .. and our world .. Haha …a whole night of thoughts … and only a few words .. hmmm.. maybe living is more important anyhow 🌏🌓💕🤗🐶
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So true, Ivor! 🙂
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Dear Ivor,
I concur with Carolyn about your excellent poem.
No more rubies and diamonds?! Then I shall send you some sapphires!
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
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Thank you .. opal’s will do fine
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As you wish, opals are coming your way right now!
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
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Thanks 🤗🌏🌓
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I’m proud to have played some small part in its creation. Well done, Ivor!
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Beautiful as always Ivor
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Thank you Mich … 🤗🌏😍
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Wise thoughts provoking
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Thank you Derrick 😉🌏
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We certainly do not need our world to be any darker as it continues to burn! Thanks for speaking up Ivor.
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Thank you Ingrid … sorry I’ve been a bit quiet with my blogging .. my self published ‘Tullawalla’ is in the final stages of editing before it goes to the printers .. Yeah .. and I’m also nearly finished my 29th Tullawalla Booklet .. and here in Geelong I’ve 2 anthology dead lines to meet with my submissions … both due in August … yep – flat trying to get everything done. … Thank you for ongoing support Ingrid 🤗🌏💕
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You sound pretty much as busy as I am 😅 good luck, and remember to take a break 😎
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Yes .. I must take more breaks Ingrid .. otherwise I’ll my shadow will detach itself ..
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Wonderful. And that song, I so love it.
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Thank you Dale .. Leonard’s song seemed to be very appropriate for my little poem
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Thank you kindly for reblogging my poem on your fabulous site 😊🌏
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