Presenting another poem from my new book “Tullawalla”
I wrote βMy Broken Mastβ in January 2020, and the poem appears in my new book βTullawallaβ

My Broken Mast
Yesterday, a sudden stormy gale
Ripped through my leafy sail
And tore my oldest branch down
Crashing onto the ground
Leaving my main mast, hurtfully marred
A long open wound, and Iβm painfully scarred
Mother, will dry my weeping tears
And Iβll recover to live another thirty years
Fatefully, my debris fell safely
All my ownerβs guests escaped injury
And I left their ship damage free
Tomorrow theyβll clear my messy sea
Then rest under the shade of me
Ivor Steven (c) January 2020
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Gβday, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. Iβm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about thoseβ¦
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Ivor, your new book is gorgeous with the poems artfully written to beautiful photos.
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Thank you kindly Barbara π€ππ
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There is double meaning in your poem, for me.
Gosh! I’ve had times I relate to the tree!
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PS…great song/vid to pair with your poem!
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Yes Carolyn β¦ the breakages during lifeβs storms and the shelter family are able to provide ..π²π‘ππ
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A moving poem Ivor π
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Thank you Ingrid ππ€π
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Carolyn nailed it
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Yes she did Derrickβ¦ sheβs very astute .. and knows how I process my emotions into my poemsππ€π
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That was lovely, Ivor π
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Thank you Sue π€πππ²
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Thank you for reblogging my article/poem from ‘Go Dog Go Cafe’ , I appreciate your support π€π
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