Drumsticks

All Images: were from my visit to the ‘Writers Retreat Workshop’, held at Drydale’s Old Courthouse & Museum on Friday
The Weekend Challenge from Weekly Prompts is the word;ย RANDOM. Please go over and visit their fabulous site by clicking on >> HERE . The poem ‘Drumsticks’ is my response to the prompt Random

Drumsticks 


Thump, thump, thump 

The muffled beat of drums 

Hollow depressing throbs 

Hauntingly echo 

From behind the heavy door 

Of the jurors’ chambers 






What will their verdict be? 

The courthouse gallery is full 

Humming in anticipation 


Has the Drummer Boyโ€™s case 

Been handled fairly? 

The alleged fatal weapons 

The Boyโ€™s drumsticks 

Are yet to be found! 








Ivor Steven (c) October 2022

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

18 thoughts on “Drumsticks”

  1. Brilliant interpretation of the challenge, Ivor – just as intended!
    I enjoyed your poem and this version of the little Drummer Boy – thank you for joining us again. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Wow, this is so wonderful, Ivor! Your photos, your poem, and that song!
    That looks like a very interesting place to visit and gain inspiration!
    Your poem is so creative!
    And that song so powerful!
    (((HUGS))) ๐Ÿ™‚ โค๏ธ

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    1. Thank you Kindly Carolyn … it was my furtherest drive away from home for over two years … it was quite an adventure for me (only 40minutes) … and I am so pleased I made the effort. … A lovely old historical building and a great venue for our writers workshop. … and it’ll be our monthly venue for the next 6 months … so I suppose there will be more poems from the old Courthouse … ๐Ÿก๐Ÿ˜๐ŸŒ๐Ÿถ

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      1. Yes โ€ฆ I should be ok too โ€ฆ Iโ€™ve been undergoing some skin cancer treatment on my face .. itโ€™s been very uncomfortable and look messy ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒ๐Ÿ“˜

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