In response to Eugi’s Moonwashed Musings Photo Prompt: Skyline … To visit her fabulous site please click on >> Here
Lines To Nowhere (Revised)
As my drapes fell apart
I saw a setting eclipse
And I decided to walk
To the south side of the moon
Carrying my plastic spoon
There, a giant vanilla cheesecake
Rolled over the crusty moonscape
On a giant crumbly base
Topped with blueberries and cream
Laying here in bed, life is but a dream
The midnight skyline begins to drool
Am I a full moon’s fool?
I will meet you at our old school
Down by the empty pool
This time we will not be ridiculed



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Ivor Steven (c) May 2023

Wow! Beautiful 👍🙌
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Thank you Carol 💕🌏😍
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Thanks for sharing this idea .You are an amazing Poet . Anita
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Thank you Anita for your lovely comments 🤗🌏😍
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Wow! How delightfully whimsical, Ivor! I love it. 💖🌕💫
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Thank you Eugenia and my revised edition ended being completed different … I suppose I should have renamed the poem too … 🌏😍💕🎶
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I love it the way it is. 💖
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So beautiful, ivor
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Thank you Beth
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Ah! Oh! So creative…vivid visuals, expressive emotions, deep dreams! 🙂
(((HUGS))) 💛🌕🌖🌘🌝💛
PS…I love the moon! I am a fool for the moon…full, or otherwise! 🙂
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Thanks Carolyn … one one my whacky and vivid dream poems … that had many mysterious connections with my subconscience … 🍰🌚🌏🌊😍💜
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A very imaginative way to describe s, lunar, eclipse!
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Dreams are full of vivid scenarios
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I like your kind of moon! Yum!!
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I must have been hungry in my dream Dwight …
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Ha ha… aren’t we always!
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That was lovely, Ivor. 🙂
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Thanks Sue .. a bit dreamy imagination
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This poem is a beautiful result of your imagination running rampant, Ivor! I love it! ❤
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Thank you Cheryl… one of those vivid dreams I was able to remember … haha… the cheesecake definitely helped 🌏📖📘🎶🖍️🍰
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Fantastic poem! I love the whimsical scene of the giant cheesecake.
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Thank you Nicole … I was dreaming about cheesecake and the moon … 🍰🌏🌙
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Sounds like some of the wild dreams I have! lol
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They are fun to write about Susi …
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True that!
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