An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
The White Azalea Peace Garden
Hello dear readers and followers, I am reposting thispoem I wrote in July 2022 in response to Eugi’s “Moonwashed Weekly Prompt” – Peaceable … to visit her fabulous site, please click on >> Here
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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45 thoughts on “The White Azalea Peace Garden”
I love this song it is the essence of our eldest son
A heart-touching poem! Beautiful photo! A fave song!
The good news for all of us…the moon sees the whole of us…watches, guides, encourages, illuminates, heals, brings joy, etc… 🙂
(((HUGS)))
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PS…I think you DO see the whole of the moon, in all good ways, Ivor, and it shows/shines in your writings! You inspire so many of us! 🙂
Thank you for your thoughtfulness and kindness Carolyn .. here my poem is disjointed like the nature of our society.. I’m not sure if I’ll ever get to view ‘the whole of the moon’ or peace ☮️🌏🤗
Yes, I feel the same way…not sure of those things.
But we can have peace within and we can promote peace each day…bring peace to the lives of those we encounter. 😉
The Romans had a saying, “If you desire peace, best prepare for war.”
Of course that didn’t work out that well for them …
— Catxman http://www.catxman.wordpress.com
Wow, this is such a thought-provoking poem indeed. Thanks so much for sharing. I like the imagery of the azaleas as it somehow contrasts to the sad message in your poem.
I love this song it is the essence of our eldest son
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Thank you Willow .. yes the Waterboys wonderful song 🎶🌏🤗
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💜💜💜
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Definitely thought-provoking, Ivor
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Thank you Derrick
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Sending love 💖
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Sending you peace Cindy ☮️🌏🤗
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Poem inspired by the azaleas and finished by the song? I haven’t heard that on in a good long while.
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Thank you Dale .. the poem is disjointed, but that’s the nature of our society and hopefully the concept of my thoughts worked ok ☮️🌏🤗
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🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you Beth
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Great poem with great symbolism! Well done.
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Thank you Dwight ☮️🌏🤗
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You are welcome!
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A heart-touching poem! Beautiful photo! A fave song!
The good news for all of us…the moon sees the whole of us…watches, guides, encourages, illuminates, heals, brings joy, etc… 🙂
(((HUGS)))
☮🌕❤️💮
PS…I think you DO see the whole of the moon, in all good ways, Ivor, and it shows/shines in your writings! You inspire so many of us! 🙂
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Thank you for your thoughtfulness and kindness Carolyn .. here my poem is disjointed like the nature of our society.. I’m not sure if I’ll ever get to view ‘the whole of the moon’ or peace ☮️🌏🤗
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Yes, I feel the same way…not sure of those things.
But we can have peace within and we can promote peace each day…bring peace to the lives of those we encounter. 😉
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Yes indeed Carolyn … we can create peace within and around us … 🤗🌞🌏🌻
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I’ll walk with you.
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West Park is a gorgeous little oasis ..
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Beautiful
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Thank you Sadje … ☮🌏😍
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You’re welcome my friend
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The Romans had a saying, “If you desire peace, best prepare for war.”
Of course that didn’t work out that well for them …
— Catxman
http://www.catxman.wordpress.com
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An interesting contemplative poem, Ivor – some things never change! 🌝
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Thank you Ingrid .. things I see locally that seem evoke my thoughts to encompass the whole world 🌍
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Wow, this is such a thought-provoking poem indeed. Thanks so much for sharing. I like the imagery of the azaleas as it somehow contrasts to the sad message in your poem.
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments Astrid
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Loving the delicate title of this poem and the careful imagery!
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Thank You Jaya .. the Peace Garden is a place I visit often and I wanted my poem to be gentle but significant …
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so heart rendering dear Ivor💞
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Peace seems to be such a heartwrenching process Cindy 💕☮
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Oh so true Ivor.. ugh💕
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You are so right about our disjointed world. 🙂
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Thank you Sue…we will not see peace in our time
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Beautiful, Ivor. Great song, too – it’s been awhile since I heard that one. Love it
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Thank you Ryan … I’m a fan of the Waterboys …
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☮🌕(((HUGS)))❤️💮
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All we saying is “Give peace a chance” ☮️💜🤗🌏😍
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Beautifully written and mind-stirring poem, Ivor. Yes, “Give peace a chance”. 🤍
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Thank you for your kind words Eugenia
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My pleasure, Ivor.
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