On Monday morning (Sunday afternoon PDT), I attended a Writing Circle Poetry Group via Zoom with our host/convener, the gracious Ali Grimshaw >> https://flashlightbatteries.blog/online-writing-circles/ and after listening to her recite a selected piece of poetry we are then encouraged to write our own poetic response in β5 minsβ β¦ mine was a rough draft and I actually recite my poem the opposite way round to my finished one below β¦
No More Tears
Old Tears
How many rivers of tears must we cry
Before all the deepest wells run dry
More Tears
Nostalgic tears never stop
They just have longer dry spells
Between the heavy showers
New Tears
Uncoiled
Barbwire hooks open old wounds
Unveiled
Remembrance tears gush to the surface
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Ivor Steven (c) November 2023
Brilliant ππ
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Thank you very much Willow β¦ I love being βBrilliantβ β¦ βit ainβt bragging if you done itβ – Walt Whitman
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Bless πππ
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Three different types of tears
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There might be more π
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You’ve summed it up in your great poems Ivorπ
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Thank you kindly Cindy β¦ Carole broke my tear ducts many years ago and the levee banks have remained unrepaired β¦ her memories shall forever flood the rivers of my soul β¦ ππ€π
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oh such a hardship but beautiful love shared. β€οΈ
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Her gracious courage and compassion was a sight to behold ππ
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Tears, tears, tears
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The rivers of lifeβs memories
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Lovely! π
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Thank you Kelley … after a few changes, the thoughts behind my original poem ended being what what I was trying to convey …
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a man in touch with his emotions is to be applauded … eskimos have more than a hundred types of ‘snow’ … I’m suspecting you might have many more ‘types’ of tears!
You keep the tissue people in business π
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Thanks Kate … and I love your analogy …
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oh what a super cute video, love the song and the cartoon … if only i could draw π¦
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Yes β¦ another wonderful song by Damien Rice πΆ
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aha but not his voice π
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Sitting with this – it is speaking to where I am feeling/wrestling right now.
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Thanks Paul … and I hope things are ok there …
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Mostly, three years ago I ended up with a situation the result of which is PTSD so it is a work in progress π Thank you Ivor.
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This is so moving my friend
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Thank you kindly Sadje … πππ
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Youβre most welcome
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Your poem touched my heart, Ivor. You’ve expressed this so well.
That sweet photo of handsome Sir Frankie AND that song/vid touched my heart, too. π
In my lifetime, I’ve learned that tears are sacred, come from the heart, are a sign of strength, and are healing. So when they want to come, I let them flow. π
(((HUGS))) β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
PS…”Tears are often the telescope by which men see far into heaven.” – Henry Ward Beecher
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Thank you kindly Carolyn, and I love the Henry Beecher quote β¦ my tears have been flowing since Carole first got MS 40 years ago ..ππππΆβ€οΈ
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I understand. πβ€οΈ
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Thanks for that …
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sometimes they need to be shed, let them flow
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I’ve had plenty of practice
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Beautifully heartfelt and emotive piece, Ivor.
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Thank you kindly Eugenia β€οΈπ
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You are most welcome, Ivor.
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Nicely done, Ivor. Sometimes the first thoughts that come to us are the best! Love your photo of Frankie!
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Thank you Dwight β¦ Frankie keeps me smiling πΆ
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Nice!
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Bittersweet π€
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Yes β¦ life is like that πππ
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Wonderful photo of Frankie! Poignant poem, beautifully written, Ivor! β€ β€ β€
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Frankie loves having his photo taken … he’s quite a show off … Thank you Cheryl πβ€
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