Throwback Friday, Just a Call Away

A poem from my WP archives (March 2018), that I’ve tinkered with, and rehashed a number of times over the years. The original poem was written years before Carole passed (12 years ago), so the wording is quite ambiguous and introverted, and I’ll leave it up to your imaginations to interpret my thoughts …


Just A Call Away (Revised #2)


Waiting, when is she to summon me

Pondering what might have been

Writing to one and all, a finale

Pen to paper, wanting her to see

How I survived the Tasman Sea

While searching for her freedom tree


Wondering if it’s a selfish sin

To wear my second skin

Under an invisible coat of tin








Ivor Steven (c) December 2023

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

17 thoughts on “Throwback Friday, Just a Call Away”

    1. Thank you Willow and I’m not sure myself … the original poem was written during some some dark and tough times … Carole’s MS was getting worse, the first stanza, (we were always hoping for a cure) … the 2nd stanza is about my recovery from my stroke (my second skin) … and trying to care for Carole at the same time … really I’m not sure how I coped… I was a mess (wearing invisible tin) 😊💙

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