Timeless white headstones
Guarding the ground of old souls
Loved ones’ final home
“Headstones”, Lyrics, Lake Of Tears
Past the forest of the flies of fire
Beyond the waters of shimmering tears
By a fire they stand
And they whisper my name
Now I seek upon the night
Small fragments of moonlight
Up the hill the headstones lie
Up the hill the reapers watching eye
Up the hill the headstones lie
Headstones…
In the circle of stones dressed in ivy
By the garden of the serene flowers
And the spirits are there
Whispering my name
Now I seek upon the night
Small fragments of moonlight
Up the hill the headstones lie
Up the hill the reapers watching eye
Up the hill the headstones lie
Headstones…
Ivor Steven (c) March 2024

A wonderful senryu Ivor! So moving ✨✨🕊🕊
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Thank you very much Carol 😊💛
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So touching
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Thank You Beth
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Lovely one, Ivor. Poignant piece!
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Thank you kindly Nancy 😊💛
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Beautifully written
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Thank you Sadje 😊💛
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Lovely, Ivor! 💙🩵💙 🕊️
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Thank you very much Cheryl 😊💛
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Your photo, your poem, your song/vid choice touched my heart and some tears pooled in my eyes. ❤️
Continued condolences and prayers for your family, Ivor.
(((HUGS))) ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you kindly dear Carolyn … he had a lovely send off and for the finale we all sung “happy birthday” for his “25th” birthday 🥳 😊💛😍🌏
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Oh, I’m so glad! Brings the joy-tears. 🙂
We celebrated Leap Year Day just for fun. And I thought of your dear uncle.
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Thank you … that is lovely 😊💛
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Two good poems – an apt haiku and good rhythm to the longer one
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Thank you very much Derrick … Lake of Tears are heavy metal band from Sweden, but I enjoy their ballads and lyrics 🎶
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A beautifully written and very touching piece, Ivor.
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Thank you very much Eugenia
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My pleasure, Ivor.
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Haunting. Love it, Ivor.
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Thank you Claudia … yes, an after funeral ode 😊💛
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Beautiful!
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Thank you very much for your generous support 😊🌏
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