

Today’s poem is one of those pieces made up of comments that I posted on some of my fellow WordPress writers’ articles during the week. In stanza order, they are
Eugi >> https://amanpan.com/2024/07/18/forecast-restless/
Willow >> https://willowdot21.wordpress.com/2024/07/17/ovi-poetry-challenge-57-wisdom-is-your-inspiration/
Gigi >> https://gigisrantsandraves.wordpress.com/2024/07/17/a-short-story-12/
One Day Older, Another Page Wiser
Dark clouds go to and froe
Casting shadowy undertows
Our flamboyant Sun knows
How to manage her daily cargo
Wisdom doesn’t grow on trees
Wisdom is like a coral sea
An incrementally maturing apogee
Life is just a dream
That we donāt understand
The meaning of
Until we āgo to sleep’

Ivor Steven (c) July 2024

that is so beautiful Ivor! A lovely piece! Xx
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Thank you Carol ⦠ššš
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Thank you for including me in this wonderful post. Greatfuil. š
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My pleasure indeed Gigi š¤šš
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A beautiful poem.
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Thank you Sadje … yes, the 3 pieces blended Ok … ššš
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Very well Iād say. Youāre welcome
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You are very kind Sadje … šš
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Most welcome
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What a lovely poem Ivor.š„°
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Thank you for your kind words Arlene ššš
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put together nicely
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Thanks Beth ⦠the stanzas found their own order šš
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A very lovely weaving of verses, Ivor! š š š
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Thanks Nancy⦠sometimes my weaving skills are ok šš
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I’d say they’re much more than ok! ā”
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Thanks, as a writer I lose perspective of what I am trying to achieve … šš
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At times we all do!
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That’s nice to know …
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A fine tapestry
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Thank you kindly Derrick š
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Very clever š
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Maybe Iām getting cleverer too šš
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Such a wonderful creative wise poem, Ivor! š
(((HUGS))) ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
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Thank you for your very kind words Carolyn ššš
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Awesome
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Thank you … šš
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I love this piece. Thank you for creating! š
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Thank you for your kind words Cassa …
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