



“Make a Wish”
Shine, hail, or snow
The moon glows and grows
Into the wizard’s noble silver disc
“It’s Time, to make wish”
Before the magical foil
Shrinks and recoils
Behind the earth’s orbital shadow
Now bestowed with a sooty air flow
From all the Wars surplus ammo


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I really like this poem! xo
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Thank you very much, Carol 😊🌏😍🌝🎶
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wishes are wonderful
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An obscure way to make wish …
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Hi Ivor, this is an interesting poem, especially the last lines.
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Thank you, Robbie … one of those writes where my thoughts twisted my sweet moon poem into an anti-war poem … it wasn’t deliberate … it just digressed that way … ??? 😊🌏🌝😎
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I understand
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I saw this same moon a while ago.
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Did you make a wish Sadje 😊🌏🌝
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I don’t do that but I try to take its pictures.
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Excellent poem, Ivor! I know exactly what my wish will be! 🌝
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Thank you kindly, Nancy … and world peace is my wish … ☮️🤗🌏😍🎶
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Yes! I pray each night for peach and sanity to be restored to our world leaders. Peace & love to you, dear Ivor!
🕊️🙏🏼✌🏼🌎 ☮️ 💛 🌍 💛 ☮️ 🌏✌🏼🙏🏼🕊️
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May the peace train find the right track soon … ☮️🤗🎶🌏😍☮️🐶
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Wish made thanks to your beautiful poem, Ivor💕
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Thank you for your kindness, Cindy 🤗😍🌝
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Beautiful, Ivor!
Yes, we must make positive kind healthy wishes for our planet, for peoples, for life. And then be a part of helping those wishes come true. 🙂
(((HUGS))) ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you very much for positive words, Carolyn … hopefully our dreams will come true someday 😊🌏😍🎶☮️🐶
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A powerful last two lines
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Thank you Derrick … and yes, the moon observing our shameful mismanagement of the earth 🌏
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Aw, A lovely wishful poem. 🙂
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Thank you kindly Sue … 😊😍🌝
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Really liked it
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Thank you … ☮️🤗🌏
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