Please Note: Derrick Knight took all the attached photos, and he kindly allowed me to reproduce them here on my poetry site.


Today’s poem is one of my verses made up of comments I posted on some of my fellow WordPress writers’ articles during the month … In stanza order, they are
Marisela > lamenting to Lee | words less spoken (wordslessspoken781842219.blog)
Claudia > Faerie Paths — Lost – Humoring the Goddess
Ben Alexander > On the back, or: My mind – The Skeptic’s Kaddish 🇮🇱 (skepticskaddish.com)
Derrick Knight > Sun, Sea, Spray – derrickjknight
Beyond the Dross and the Moss
Loneliness is an empty place
Nothingness is a blank space
I am not lost
Nor buried under the frost
I am just looking for the gloss
Beyond the dusty dross
And the encroaching moss
Tomorrow’s gap
It is not a trap
Zap!
There is a world map
Wild windy seas are wondrous lees
Like a wizard’s wok full of bees


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Clever word play here Ivor
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Thank you very much, Sadje 😊🌏📘✍️
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You’re welcome
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Good one, Ivor. What’s even more amazing is the fact that there are composed of different comments!
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Thank you kindly, Shweta … somehow after shuffling the stanzas the poem seems to work 😊🌏📘
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Beautiful share Ivor
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Thank you very much, Tanvir
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Such a special, creative poem! I always enjoy your “comments-poems”! 🙂
Derrick’s photos are always fabulous! And I love how they are a muse inspiring you to write lovely poems! 🙂
Ivor, you and Derrick always bring smiles and joy into my life. I so appreciate both of you. 🙂
(((HUGS))) ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you very much for your kind and generous support, I appreciate your wonderful comments, and I am very fortunate that Derrick allows me to reproduce his wonderful photos on my sight, even before I ask him! … 💕💛😍🌏📘😎🐶
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Word artist
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Thank you kindly, Beth … 🖋📘
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This is excellent, dear Ivor! Very clever write. 🖋️🤩🌏
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Thank you very much … sometimes my first instant thoughts are almost sensible, Nancy … 🤗🌏📘
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Well done, Ivor. Thank you for honouring my photographs
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Always my pleasure Derrick …
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The rhyming is, quite, clever!
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Thank you kindly …
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❤
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Wonderful both of you!
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Thank you very much for your kind words Cindy …
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