


Rehabilitated
In the days of old
When the turquoise sky
Wore a smile of pure white gold
I remember gazing up beyond
The yellow wattle blossom
And I discovered the universe
Was a deep blue infinite pond
Today, I am perplexed
I witnessed the same colourful
White-gold and blue vortex
Resurface inside my cosmic annex


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This is such a deep and profound poem Ivor
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Yes indeed, and very reflective in a vague way β¦ thank you for your thoughtful words Sadly ππ
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Youβre welcome βΊοΈ
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So personal and deep
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Yes β¦ a bit like Dr Who, Iβve regenerated myself after each of my 3 strokes, but Iβm not the same person β¦ my poem is a bit vague but rehabilitation is only a partial fix, and lifeβs puzzle is missing some pieces π
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Beautiful Ivor.
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Thank you kindly Cindy
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This is somewhat different for you, dear Ivor. I like it! π©΅
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Yes β¦ a reflective poem that is full happy and sad emotions β¦ a bit like Dr Who, Iβve regenerated myself after each of my 3 strokes, but Iβm not the same person β¦ my poem is a bit vague but rehabilitation is like that, only a partial fix, and my lifeβs puzzle is missing some pieces ??? π€πΒ
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Dr Who! I love that, Ivor. Take care of yourself, my friend. π
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Dr Who is a fantastic show β¦ and Iβve been an avid fan for 60 yearsβ¦ π€ππ
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Beautiful heart-touching trio of photos, poem and song, Ivor.
We go through so many things in life that leave us changed…sometimes changed in negative ways…but, also, in positive ways…each day we live we learn, we grow, we persevere.
That song always brings solace and hope. π I heard years ago that George Harrison wrote it at a particularly difficult time in his life. I’m so glad he did!
You keep writing, too, Ivor! Your poems uplift, inspire, help, comfort, teach, bring smiles, help us feel less alone in our struggles and so much more. Your gift of writing poems is a gift to all of us who read them. π
(((HUGS))) β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you for your kindness and thoughtful responseβ¦ my strokes have been hard to recover from β¦ hopefully my writings are a positive help to those who are struggling through difficult times π€πππ
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They certainly are a positive help! π β€οΈ
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Thank you Carolyn … πππ
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This is a gorgeous piece, Ivor, and so full of depth! π
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Sorry Eugi … I’ve just found your lovely comment in my Spam … πππ
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No worries, Ivor! β£οΈ
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Deep reflective
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Regenerating doesnβt come naturally to us humans
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Very beautiful
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Thank you, Robbie ππ
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