


Today’s poem, Exodus, was a poetic response/comment to Eugi’s (Moonwashed Musings) wonderful poem >> https://amanpan.com/2025/01/29/look-at-me/
Exodus
I am not dexterous
Or able to earn my exodus
Because the showy floss
On my old veneer’s gloss
Has been foolishly lost

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Ivor Steven (c) February 2025

Wonderful poem, Ivor. Great take. Love the pictures. Beautiful! Have a fabulous day.π
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Thank you very much, Grace πΆπππ
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My pleasure π
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A lovely post, Ivor πΈπ
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I was nearly going to submit this one for βsmall pleasuresβ but I’ve done 5 poems, and hopefully Iβll get time to send them tomorrow πππ
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Fantastic π
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good one Ivor and I love the word exodus
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Thank you, Beth
Sometimes I want to run away and hide after doing something foolish ππ
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Haha! Good one, Ivor!π
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I think a some stage we all get foolishly lost
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So we do. π€π
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Very nice Ivor
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Thank you kindly, Sadje ππ
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Most welcome
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I feel this, especially the ‘foolishly lost” bit
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Thank you kindly, VJ… foolish is like being a goldfish swimming in sn empty dish after making a wrong wish… ππ
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OMGoodness, dear Ivor! I feel your need to run away and hide. No matter how old we get, that feeling will creep up. Hope you’re having a lovely day with Sir Frankie! π₯°
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Thank you, Nancy… and we going out for a relaxing lunch with a lady from my writers group πππ
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Lovely! Enjoy! βΊοΈ
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A good one, indeed, Ivor. I understand the feeling of an exodus! Sometimes this crazy world gets on my nerves! π¦
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Thank you for your piece of inspiration, Eugi πππ
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You are very welcome, Ivor!
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This one describes me to a “T” at the moment, Ivor. Love this! ππ π π’ π
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Cheryl β¦ yes, we all have those foolish moments when we just want to run away and hide β¦πππ
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This one made me smile! I thought it could have been a limerick as well.
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Thank you very much, Dwight β¦ I thought about a limerick, but I couldnβt make it fit the format β¦ π€ππ
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:>)
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So beautifully expressed! So relatable!
I hope you and Sir Frankie have a lovely day!
(((HUGS))) β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you very much for your lovely words, Carolyn … and we had a wonderful catch and lunch at the Cafe with my writer friend, who kindly gave me a copy of her new book … ππππΆππ΅ππ
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At least the bird photographs become better all the time
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Thank you very much
, Derrick
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