What’s Out There?


Today’s poem is one of my verses made up of comments I posted on two of my fellow WordPress writers’ articles during the month … In stanza order, they are:
*Stanzas I & 2, Yelling Rosa >> https://yerosacom.wordpress.com/2025/05/01/about-the-death-e-morte/
*Stazas 3 & 4, Sara >> https://purplepeninportland.com/2025/05/01/i-wish-a-dream/



What’s Out There?



Out there, beyond the cosmic frost
I think we all would be lost
And the scientists have their stars crossed

The universe cannot be bossed,
over glossed, or embossed
By “AI” and Microsoft

I raise my flask
To solving the task

Maybe it’s too much to ask
Of those that quietly bask
From behind their cozy masks








Ivor Steven (c) May 2025

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

24 thoughts on “What’s Out There?”

    1. Thank you very much for your kind words, Nancy … it’s one of those bits and pieces poems that when I couple them together they somehow seem to form a sensible poem … I thought you would like Puscifer’s intriguing music/video 🎶😍🌏📘📖

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  1. Wowza! What a wonderful weaving of wise written words with worthy wonderings while wandering! 🙂
    I like when write these poems of your comments to others! These poems are so creative, Ivor! This one has a powerful message!
    And OH MY GOSH…your photos are spectacular! Communing with the moon and the night-sky often births poems. 🙂
    (((HUGS))) ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Yeah, and not sure how or why my comments seem to fit together so well … they are comments about different subjects on separate days??? … I do add a word or two to make them flow, but really it’s quite fortuitous how it works out 📖🌏📘 .. thank you for your wonderfully enthusiastic response, Carolyn 📘😍🌏📖🐶🎶😊

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    1. Thank you, it’s always a creative surprise when these separate comments on different days about different subjects, somehow fit together … maybe it’s in my style of writing 📖

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