Moonwashed Musings Weekly Prompt >>Let one or more words in my poem be your inspiration.
“Nature’s resounding overture about life Can be recited by a band’s little fife Or re-enacted by a painter’s spatula knife” … Ivor
Cascading Snowflakes (an Epigram)
With every breath we take After our weary eyes awake The existence of daybreak Appeases our heartaches As cascading, soft snowflakes Gently flow over our old keepsakes
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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35 thoughts on “Cascading Snowflakes (an Epigram)”
This is so beautiful Ivor.
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Thank you for your lovely words, Sadje 😍🌏📖
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You’re most welcome
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such a gentle poem
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Beautiful poem, Ivor
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Thank you kindly, Robbie
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I love that last line!
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Thank you very much for your lovely words, Barbara
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You’re welcome, Ivor!
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Lovely monorhyme!
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Thank you very much, Val … it didn’t start off that way but after a few lines, I thought “well, let’s go with the flow” 😍🌏
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Oh, that was very special, dear Ivor! 🥰
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Thank you for appreciating my work, Nancy 🎶😊😍🌏
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My great pleasure, dear Ivor. It’s not difficult! 🥰
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😊😍🌏🎶📖
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Nicely done my friend! Everyday above ground is a good day! :>)
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Yes indeed my friend 😊🌏
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Interesting
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Thank you 😊🌏
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your poem is, very, deeply, felt.
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Thank you for your thoughts
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So lovely and gentle, Ivor. Your last line brings your thoughts together beautifully. 💗
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Thank you for your lovely words, Eugi… it took me a few goes to get the last line to work, but the finale now has nice flow 📖😍😊🌏
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You’re most welcome, Ivor! 💗
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So beautiful! So heart-touching!
(((HUGS))) ❄️❤️❄️
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Thank you very much, Carolyn 😍😊🌏💕
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Words painted vividly and lovely, Ivor! 💓
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Thank you for lovely words, Cindy 😊😍🌏
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You’re so welcome, Ivor! 💕
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Thank you kindly, Eugi
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Wonderful, vibrant energy in this poem, Ivor.
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Thank you very much, Sara
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Lovely post and song
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Thank you very much, Sarah
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