An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
Throwback Friday, Winter Sun
Todayโs Throwback Friday poem is drawn from my upcoming book, Time Hears No Sound. It appears in Chapter 2, Nature: An Unbiased Timekeeper
Winter Sun
What my careless eyes perceived My unprepared senses Soon, I found out that they had been deceived The day appeared sunny enough for a stroll And I ventured into the afternoon cold Ten steps out, a glacial wind took hold
The blustery arctic blast Snapped every limb within grasp My breath turned into icy glass My ears were stabbed by frigid darts My cheeks were slapped by gloves of frozen brass And the winter sun failed to warm my heart
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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27 thoughts on “Throwback Friday, Winter Sun”
Oh my… sounds like our winter weather which has begun. Beautifully written, Ivor.
Aw.
But, also, ooh.
And, also, excellent poem! Such vivid images!
Through your photo, your poem, and that song/vid you got our senses involved. We can feel the cold. ๐ฅถ Some days just need to be indoor-days…especially when the cold is bitter and the wind is blustery, or the snow is flying. ๐
Coop always enjoyed laying on the patio in the winter sun…but only if it was not windy, snowy or rainy. ๐
(((HUGS))) โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Oh my… sounds like our winter weather which has begun. Beautifully written, Ivor.
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Thank you, Dale โฆ our spring and winter were like twins, hopefully it will warm up soon down here ๐๐
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I hope so for you, Ivor. Not going to happen over here. Plus this snow we got so early is staying around! What is up with that?
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Iโm a beach bum, and this cold weather is no good for me
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Then it is a good thing you visited Canada when you did. Of course, you chose the mildest province ๐
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Oh yes, my cousins advised me of the best time to visit โฆ ๐๐๐๐๐จ๐ฆ
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‘My cheeks were slapped by gloves of frozen brass’–what a brilliantly fantastic line, Ivor! I love it!
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Thank you so much for your fabulous words, Lois ๐๐
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Iโm not a fan of cold weather. Youโve described it really well here.
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Thank you, Robbie, Iโm definitely no snow bunny either ๐๐
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Ooh! A very chilly day.
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Very chilly ๐ฅถ for spring, Sadje
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Yes. A friend is planning to visit Australia and she was buying thick clothes.
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Itโs only chilly down here in the south ๐
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But youโll be soon headed to summer?
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Yes, hopefully it will warm up soon ๐๐
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ooh, cold but beautiful
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Our spring has been unseasonably cold ๐ฅถ
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well, cold to one, may not be cold to another )
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Aw.
But, also, ooh.
And, also, excellent poem! Such vivid images!
Through your photo, your poem, and that song/vid you got our senses involved. We can feel the cold. ๐ฅถ Some days just need to be indoor-days…especially when the cold is bitter and the wind is blustery, or the snow is flying. ๐
Coop always enjoyed laying on the patio in the winter sun…but only if it was not windy, snowy or rainy. ๐
(((HUGS))) โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Well, Iโm definitely no snow bunny, Carolyn .. it never snows in Geelong ๐๐๐๐ถ
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Really evocative
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Thank you very much indeed, Derrick
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Sounds like our weather today! Frigid temps, freezing winds, and frosty conditions!
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But itโs supposed to be spring here , Carol
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