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This poem grew from a series of poetic anecdotes I first shared as comments on fellow bloggers’ posts. In stanza order, they were inspired by:
David >> Back to the soil, or: Stretching forth – The Skeptic’s Kaddish
Eugi >> Wordless Wednesday – Poesy Perspectives
Susi >> Erred – I Write Her
VJ >> Turning (tanka) – One Woman’s Quest
An Albatross and the Saboteurs
Underneath all the mounds,
we are all bound together
by the same ground,
whether we are lost or found.
The packaging is losing its gloss,
but the contents are not lost –
still spirited like an albatross.
Bluffers and shovers
Swoop like overprotective plovers,
act like “Big Brother,”
ring the buzzer,
usher out the duffers,
and snuffer the crushers.
Oh, so many detours
and hidden contours.
Who are these saboteurs?
Lisa O’Neill’s music has a way of grounding us in what matters. This song, in particular, feels like a quiet reckoning—an honest look at the world and the winds that shape it.
Lisa O’Neill, The Wind Doesn’t Blow This Far Right, Lyrics
[Verse 1]
I’ve lately been thinking of an old friend
Who I haven’t seen in a while
Last night I dreamed that the same friend
Passed without sayin’ goodbye
[Verse 2]
Oh, to be wild like the roses
Oh, to be red with delight
My blood is red out of fury
The wind doesn’t blow this far right
[Verse 3]
Some terrors are born out of nature
Some terrors are born overnight
Some terrors are born out of leaders
With their eye on a different prize
[Verse 4]
The thing is, some leaders are players
And players sometimes can be clowns
And clowns then sometimes can be dangerous
When they’re there and yet they can’t be found
[Verse 5]
The Big Mac, the big man, the big bomb
The power of money and lies
The power of fear in the people
The wind doesn’t blow this far right
[Verse 6]
Some terrors are born out of nature
Some terrors are born overnight
Some terrors are born out of leaders
With their eye on a different prize
[Verse 7]
Oh, to be wild like the roses
Oh, to be red with delight
My blood is red out of fury
The wind doesn’t blow this far right
[Verse 8]
Drill, baby, drill
Don’t, baby, don’t
Don’t you hear the winds, feel the fires as they burn?
Beautiful planet, beautiful home
Drill, baby, drill
Don’t, baby, don’t
[Verse 9]
Kill, baby, kill
Don’t, baby, don’t
Don’t you hear the kids as you blindly bulldoze on?
Beautiful children, starved to the bone
Kill, baby, kill
Don’t, baby, don’t
Kill, baby, kill
Don’t, baby, don’t
Ivor Steven © January 2026

Everywhere we are beset with saboteurs.
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Yes, that’s the problem, despite all our good intentions, Sadje
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Very true my friend
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Excellent compilation poem, dear Ivor. ♡
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Yes, I think one of my best combination poems my friend 📖📘🎶🌏💕
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This is fantastic, Ivor. Tell me, if I may ask… do you keep previous poetic comments of yours in mind when you write subsequent verses on other friends’ blogs?
Shabbat shalom,
David
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Thank you, David, and to answer your question, my memory is very bad; I can hardly remember the poem I wrote yesterday, so all poetic comments are totally independent of each other, David 📖📘🌏😎
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With so many saboteurs out there, we must take care! Great Albatross pic!
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Oh, the pic was an Copilot creation of 2 of my old images, 😎📘
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As always a thoughtful response created from your thoughtful responses!
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Wonderful poem and thank you for introducing me to Lisa O’Neill.
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Thank you for appreciating both my poem and Lisa O’Neill’s song 🎶 .. I’ve become quite an avid follower of her music and lyrics, Dale , and recent I Subscribed to her Music Site
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Isn’t it wonderful to discover someone new (to us)?
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Yes … and I am partial to Irish singer/songwriters
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thanks so much for your poem, and this song, sounds like our current leader and I love her voice
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I am really excited with how the poem unfolded, Beth … and Lisa is a great Irish singer/songwriter
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Always a saboteur. Brilliant, Ivor.
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Thank you for being part of my inspiration, VJ
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My pleasure!
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Oh, wow, Ivor! I love how these all came together. Wonderful that we could be such an inspiration to you. Thank you for including me in this beautiful composition!
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It’s a pleasure writing my anecdotal comments and to shape them into is both a challenge and personally gratifying, Susi 📖💕🌏
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That’s how I feel about my 100 word story wordles I do with the restriction of using the words in order! Very challenging but definitely gratifying when I can create an interesting story out of it. 🙂
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Oh, this IS one of your bestest comment compilation poems, Ivor! 🙂
And Lisa O’Neill is an amazing artist…her voice, her songs, the emotions she evokes. ❤️
(((HUGS))) for you and Sir Frankie! 🙂 ❤️
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Thank you very much, Carolyn, and I was excited when this fell together … as for Lisa O’Neill , I am in total awe of her music and lyrics 🎶💕🌏😎📖😍🐶
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Profound thoughts
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I’m not sure where all these thoughts come from … or why my thoughts are prompted to write poetic comments …
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Reading this made me imagine the sound of a voice or a song hovering at the edge of the words. Even though this is a poem, the mention of music in the text created a sense of sound that was almost tactile in my mind.
What lingered was not a particular melody but the idea of sound grounding thought and feeling together in a way that felt quietly present rather than overt.
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments. Lisa O’Neill’s incredible song was indeed a great accompaniment to my collection of poetic anecdotes … 🎶📖📘😍🌏
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Beautiful poem Ivor, and a beautiful song, from an artist I hadn’t ever heard of…
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Oh, she’s a very talented Irish singer/songwriter, here’s another incredible song, Carol …
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