Today’s Throwback Friday poem (originally written in June 2023) is drawn from my upcoming book, Time Hears No Sound. It appears as the second poem in Chapter 11, Poetry in Slow Motion: Who’s Keeping Time.


“Down to the Valley” was written on a day when I strayed from the usual path, letting the landscape guide the poem. It’s a small journey into the unexpected, where nature and recollection meet.
Down To the Valley
Roaming.
Off the beaten track
Over sagged wire fences
Through plowed fields
Down to the valley below
Where sunflowers grow
Detouring.
Across the babbling brook
Toward the castle of broken glass
Cocooned together in woven grass
Until time awakens the past

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Until Eyes Hear Sound
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Perceptions:
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Tullawalla:
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OR: >> You may email me directly for a signed copy at
ivorrs20@gmail.com … and I can send you a PayPal account,
for the Book, plus Postage.
Ivor Steven © March 2026

thank you so much for this, visually, aesthetic, nature walk, truly amazing, how you brought nature to life with your words!
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Thank you very much for thoughtful words 😊🌏📖
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Sounds like a wonderful trek. Thanks for taking me along.
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Thank you for following me along the way 😊🌏
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Lovely little walkie with you and Frankie and a fabulous soundtrack for company. Can’t go wrong! 🥰 🐶🌻🌏🎶
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Thank you for coming along on our walkie, it’s certainly a pleasurable way to see my neighbourhood 🐶😀🌏🥰🌻
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Nice poem, Ivor.
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Thank you, Andrew
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You’re welcome.
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beautiful and always be cautious near ‘the castle of broken glass’
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Those that live in glass castles shouldn’t throw stones …
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Love the imagery and the flowers!
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Thank you so much, Susie 😊🌻💛
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This is lovely, Ivor
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I’m never sure about what poems to select for my manuscripts/books, but this little reflective piece picked itself, Robbie 💛🤗🥰
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