G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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45 thoughts on “The World’s Cold Old Fire”
this is so beautiful and I love the music, too Ivor! 🙂
Exactly! It effects us more in our country as Iran is our neighbor and brother Islamic country- and on the side of America are the gulf countries and Saudi Arabia who are Islamic countries too. What a quagmire we are stuck in. And for no valid reason.
Thank you for appreciating my emotional poem, Nancy … war is not game, and innocent people are being killed and maimed, the warring leaders should feel ashamed, and there never seem to be able to sign their name, in the blank corner of the world’s stained picture frame …
So many of us are right there with you, Ivor, in thoughts, emotions, concerns…we are feeling overwhelmed in many ways. Remember you are not alone.
Ivor, this poem is one of your best! Your word-images are powerful and vivid, your message-reminders are such truth, so wise!
We continue to look to the moon and sun (and all of nature) for centering, for stability, for peace, for hope…and music always helps us…so grateful for nature and for music. 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🤍☀️🌙 🤍🎶☮️ 🤍
My quill is running out of ink, my mind is overwhelmed, my heart is quivering, and my soul is crying … why, oh why, are those responsible so blind and unkind … 🥰💕🤗☮️🎶🌼🌖🌞🐶🌻
this is so beautiful and I love the music, too Ivor! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Carol 🎶🌏☮️🥰
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And I am being immorally overwhelmed right alongside of you dear Ivor….
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I think there’s a lot of us … Violet
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No we don’t need another fire or another war
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Thank you, Sadje 🥰☮️
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Sending prayers dear friend. I was very disappointed the both countries didn’t come to an agreement.
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It’s a very sad situation, Sadje
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Very sad and when someone like Trump is one of the decision makers- it can go sideways very quickly.
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It’s going sideways and downhill
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Exactly! It effects us more in our country as Iran is our neighbor and brother Islamic country- and on the side of America are the gulf countries and Saudi Arabia who are Islamic countries too. What a quagmire we are stuck in. And for no valid reason.
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It’s complicated, especially when then world is ’round’, there seems to be far to many sharp edges …
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Yes, very complicated. The lack of trust is the result of lack of honesty and sincere intentions.
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So very true, Ivor.
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I wish it wasn’t so true …. ☮️💜
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It’s beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Celeste
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Well said!
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Thank you, VJ
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Welcome
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Very true and moving verse, my dear friend 💙
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Thank you for appreciating my emotional poem, Nancy … war is not game, and innocent people are being killed and maimed, the warring leaders should feel ashamed, and there never seem to be able to sign their name, in the blank corner of the world’s stained picture frame …
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Thank you for another brilliant verse and song, dear Ivor. 💙🎶
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Thank you … and I’m hoping your poor paw 🐾 is starting to feel betterer … 🥰🤗🎶
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So many of us are right there with you, Ivor, in thoughts, emotions, concerns…we are feeling overwhelmed in many ways. Remember you are not alone.
Ivor, this poem is one of your best! Your word-images are powerful and vivid, your message-reminders are such truth, so wise!
We continue to look to the moon and sun (and all of nature) for centering, for stability, for peace, for hope…and music always helps us…so grateful for nature and for music. 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🤍☀️🌙 🤍🎶☮️ 🤍
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My quill is running out of ink, my mind is overwhelmed, my heart is quivering, and my soul is crying … why, oh why, are those responsible so blind and unkind … 🥰💕🤗☮️🎶🌼🌖🌞🐶🌻
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I understand.
And I wonder why they are like that, too. 😦
Please give Frankie some gentle pats and pets for me. ❤️
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We have both been having a restful day, relaxing and being kind to each other … Frankie knows when things are getting me down … 🐶🥰😊🌏💚💕
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Yes, they are so intuitive. Coop was the same way with me. ❤️
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Woof woof, 🐶🐾🥰
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Profound message, Ivor.
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Thank you very much, Andrew… ☮️🤗
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You’re welcome.
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Maravilloso! Excelente post. Siempre es un placer encontrarte entre mis lecturas. Un abrazo!
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Thank you kindly 📖🌏🤗
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Beautifully written, Ivor; So on point – truly wonderful
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I wish with all heart that the situation will change for the better 🤗☮️🥰
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I should think most of us do. 💞
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it’s so overwhelming, isn’t it?
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Nothing is changing, everything is so soul destroying
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orban gone!
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Such a powerful poem with very effective refrain
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Thank you, Derrick … and yes, the refrain did its job …
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I read this as a warning chant, almost ritualistic. Powerful and nicely constructed, as always Ivor. There’s not a spare planet!
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They keep looking one, but I think all the smart planets out there are busily hiding from our war-torn planet …
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