An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
Nature’s Canvas (two Haiku)
These two haiku grew from different moments — the first shaped by the quiet colours in my own sky, the second written in response to Colleen’s moon‑lit Quadrille (link below). Together they trace a small passage from daylight’s pastel calm to the deeper bloom of night. Link:Colleen’s post —The Moon flower, Quadrille, dVerse – Tanka Tuesday
Nature’s Canvas (two Haiku)
The white canvas clouds Hover in front of the sun Nature’s pastel sky
In darkness she blooms The other side of the moon Above her white tomb
For the moments we hold, and the ones that slip beyond us.
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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19 thoughts on “Nature’s Canvas (two Haiku)”
Quietly powerful writing with the perfect soundtrack; another new piece. Listening to the music while looking at your images, the clouds seemed to slowly move. Inspiring, my friend. 💙🌥️🎶
Oh, that blanket of puffy pastel clouds! I get lost in them! 🙂
Two vivid Haiku! 🙂 I can feel the emotion in them while reading them.
Fab music! 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🩷 💛⋆。˚ ☁️ ˚。⋆ 💜🩵
PS…wonderful title, too! 🙂
Thank you for all of wonderful and lovely comments, Carolyn … and it was great to catch up Colleen, I have so many followers these days, it’s impossible for me to keep up with my blogging commitments … 📖📘🥰🌏🐶🎶💕😎
Quietly powerful writing with the perfect soundtrack; another new piece. Listening to the music while looking at your images, the clouds seemed to slowly move. Inspiring, my friend. 💙🌥️🎶
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Thank you kindly my friend, and those clouds soft pastel appearance were quite mesmerising … 🎶🥰
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What a tantalizing pair!
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Thank you so much, Violet
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Loved them both Ivor 🤗🤗💖💖
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Thank you very much, Carol 🥰🌏🎶
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Oh, that blanket of puffy pastel clouds! I get lost in them! 🙂
Two vivid Haiku! 🙂 I can feel the emotion in them while reading them.
Fab music! 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🩷 💛⋆。˚ ☁️ ˚。⋆ 💜🩵
PS…wonderful title, too! 🙂
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Thank you for all of wonderful and lovely comments, Carolyn … and it was great to catch up Colleen, I have so many followers these days, it’s impossible for me to keep up with my blogging commitments … 📖📘🥰🌏🐶🎶💕😎
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Yes, life is very busy (but good for me 🙂 ), so I quit writing blogs and just comment on a few blogs these days. 🙂
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Yes, I understand, and I’m nearly getting too old and tired for all this writing and blogging …📃📘🥰🐶
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So very beautiful
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Thank you very much, Sadje
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You’re most welcome
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Beautiful.
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Thenk you so much, Gigi
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one leads into another – so nice
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A fine coupling
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Beautiful ♥️
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Thank you so much, Caleb
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