What began as two simple responses — one to the city’s hard truths, one to the fading light — has merged into a single reflection on how we move through darkness and bridge life’s rolling undertow.



The first stanza is Nancy’s, and the second is David’s.
Nancy … Asphalt Jungle – The Elephant’s Trunk
David … We stand, or: Our bodies tilt – The Skeptic’s Kaddish 🇮🇱
It’s Sad
It’s sad how some people can sink so low.
It’s sad how the onlookers come and go.
It’s sad how Skid Row groans and crows.
It’s sad how urban rainbows lose their glow,
and drown in life’s rolling undertow
Nearing the looming edge of night,
is there a hidden bridge
between life’s fading light
and that last, unbroken ridge?
And somewhere in the half‑light, we keep searching for the bridge to span life’s rolling undertow.
Ivor Steven © May 2026

I am honored by you to be included in your splendid poem in the company of David. For the finishing touch, you have chosen the sounds of Mr. Cohen; what could be more perfect? Thank you, my dear friend. This is lovely. 🎶📝💙
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My absolute pleasure my friend, and I’m always amazed at how these different anecdotes about different topics seem to fit together 🥰📘📖🎶
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So am I! Wonderful pairing 😌
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Lovely collaboration!
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Thank you, Dale
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What a gorgeous joining of two perfect verses!
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Thank you so much, Violet … these combined poems are gorgeous fun to create
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