Words Fall Through the Window

This poem grew from three small conversations across the WordPress community — first with David, then with Nancy, and then with David once more. Each reply carried its own quiet image, and when I gathered them together, they seemed to form a single drift of thought, as if the words had slipped through the same window and landed in one place.
In stanza order, they are.
1. David: Sketches, poems, scraps, or: Dreams – The Skeptic’s Kaddish 
2. Nancy: Unread Message – The Elephant’s Trunk 
3. David: Intellectual or Public introspectual – The Skeptic’s Kaddish 


Between light and shadow, these moments gather — small echoes leading toward the words that follow.



Written in response to Sadje’s ‘What Do You See? #345’ prompt
>> What do you see # 345- 15, June- 2026 – Keep it alive

A quiet moment at the window that opened into the poem below






Words Fall Through the Window

Looking through a window 
Searching for tomorrow 
There is only an afterglow 
As life lingers in limbo

Petals softly fall 
Knowing the sound of silence 
“Do not wait for me” 

Sailing alone in my rescue craft 
I sense a spirited updraught 
rising through the stairwell’s shaft
 




Where the view softens, and the silence deepens, somewhere beyond the glass, the music carries what the words leave behind




Ivor Steven ©  June 2026

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

6 thoughts on “Words Fall Through the Window”

    1. Thank you for being an inspiration for my poem, your articles seem to nudge me to respond with a thoughtful comment my friend and as Wendy’s amazing song, I was fortunate enough to see her live way back when … she was referred to Australia’s ‘Janis Joplin’ 🎶🥰💙📘📖

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