Today I was struggling for a title and the wording of my 2nd line, but after a chat with a friend of mine, a well known poet, who’s, “Living on the equator and longing for snow”. and she inadvertently inspired me, to come up with the title, and complete my second line….
There’s a Penguin In My Courtyard
my courtyards a frozen pond
cold enough for a penguin
shrouds of ice lay upon the ground
and a crisp sharpness cuts the sound
of the birds unthawed songs of silence
as fernery fronds curl in glaciated defiance
and in the corner there’s a frostbitten spider’s web
while frigidly rigid is the succulent flower bed
above there’s the sun’s ambient saffron disc
the dawn’s prediction that golden days do exist
Ivor Steven (c) June 2020
good one!
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Very innovative poem.
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Great imagery! Even though I am in Florida and it’s 90 degrees, you made me shiver.
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It’s the middle of winter here….Zero is very cold for Geelong…
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This is very creative, Ivor! love the idea of a penguin in your courtyard! Brrr!
Love this line: of the birds unthawed songs of silence..
We are really cooking here… in the 90s F.
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Oh wow what a contrast… another “Zero” morning today.. ..
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Brrrrr! you must be way south!
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Yes, Geelong is the southern state of Victoria, and where an hour south of Melbourne… ๐
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You must get Antarctic Winds!
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Yep…it’s really cold then….. but Tasmania gives us a bit of a windbreak…
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Your poetry is getting better and better! Really!
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Haha.. during lockdown…. I seem to be writing more and more Claudia….and yes you’re right…. I know myself …. my work seems to have become betterer… Thank you for vote of confidence, I appreciate your support…. xxx
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I love the image!!! We will be having a hot and sweaty one today so this is a nice cool drink of words today.
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Yes another cold morning today, “Zero”…haha…opposites do attract…
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Oh my. I do like cold weather too so it wouldn’t bother me. ๐ have a warm cup of tea on me Ivor!!!
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Haha..wearing my beanie, while a my desk this morning…. brrr.. .โโ๐
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“All of Gods creatures got a place in the choir” Ivor, another tune for you…
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Very beautiful!
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Thank you Lucy….the cold morning “snapped” my frozen fingers into action….
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Beautifully evoked. Very well done
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Thank you, the frosty morning ‘snapped’ my frozen fingers into action. โ๐๐
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Oh! Very clever ๐. You did very well. Strange to think of you wintering while here in the UK summer we are also freezing with brutal winds and heavy downpours…โ๐ฌ
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Ivor, you may tell your friend on the equator that I can send her plenty of snow and cold in January. I’m willing to share!
Wonderful poem, although it’s difficult to imagine as we’ve entered summer here. You can send the penguin north toward the end of the year, but not too soon. ๐
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My friend Gina, would enjoy your snowy January..
My Penguin seems like it here in Geelong… ๐งโ๐๐
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Wowza, Ivor! Your imagery is stunning!
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Thank you Eugenia… amazing what a frosty morning snaps into the imagination….
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This is lovely. So evocative
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Thank you Lorraine. ๐๐
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Reblogged this on Reading, Writing, and Reflections and commented:
Another poem by my talented friend Ivor. Love this line -” a crisp sharpness cuts the sound
of the birds unthawed songs of silence”
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Brr!!! ๐ Stay warm! Stay safe! Let the sun shine in!
(((HUGS))) ๐
PS…penguins are so much fun to watch!
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Yeah, ..we have the Fairy Penguin Parade here in Victoria, about 3 hours from my place
https://www.penguins.org.au/attractions/penguin-parade/
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Love it! ๐
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Thank you Sue, it’s going to be a bit milder today.. ๐๐
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This penguin is much cuter than the one from your other poem. Kudos to your snow loving muse! She does inspire in any weather! I like these lines the best: and a crisp sharpness cuts the sound of the birds unthawed songs of silence.
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Oh Gina loved that line too…. great minds think alike…!!๐๐
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