there is a darkness
within us all
waiting i confess
for that beckoning call
i am a mere man
her glass jar
folds in my hand
housing her lonely star
like lava bleeding into the sea
her beckoning green eyes
did melt me
Ivor Steven (c) February 2022
there is a darkness
within us all
waiting i confess
for that beckoning call
i am a mere man
her glass jar
folds in my hand
housing her lonely star
like lava bleeding into the sea
her beckoning green eyes
did melt me
Ivor Steven (c) February 2022
Lovely, Ivor. Have a beautiful day!
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Thank you Mary … 😊🌏💛
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Very nice Ivor 💜
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Thank you Willoe
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💜💜💜
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Beautiful imagery Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje ..😊🌏💕
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You’re welcome
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Another fine tribute
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Thank you Derrick .. and there will always be more
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Of course
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And it is clear from your words that she is with you still 🙏
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Always .. undeniably so 🤗🌏💛
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Oh so beautiful Ivor..have a lovely day..
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Thank you Mich .. her beauty lives on within, for all those who were privileged to have known her 💕🌏
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🌹🌹🤗🤗
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Giving your opening lines, am I to assume something naughty happened here?
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Naughty but always nice … in my darkest of times she was my light 🌞🌏
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Just teasing, Ivor. Don’t mean to make light of your love.
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Oh that’s ok .. I am never sure of what I am trying to say .. most of my poems are jumbled, like most of my thoughts 💛😊
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How sweet, Ivor. Your love burns bright.
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Thank you Punam .. the light will never go out 💕😊🌏
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Of course, it won’t! You are welcome. 😊
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And she has never left you
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Loyal spirits never leave 😊
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This reminds me of many people I have interviewed over the years who lost a loved one. Though they did not wish their lives to end, they looked forward to being with those who went before them. I don’t know for certain this is what your referencing but it made me think of those people.
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Like most of my writings .. I write about the emotions of my thoughts rather than the event .. .. and I suppose you are right in a way .. I have that feeling of wishing to be reunited when I die
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I understand. I heard so many people tell me in so many different ways…they wanted to be with someone. I could hear their words echo in your poem.
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Thank you Colleen .. I think it’s a natural emotion for me to have after such an amazingly enduring and endearing time together 😊🌏🤗💛
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I think so too Ivor. 🙂
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Twins 😊
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😁😁
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She shines so brightly in your photo, your poem, and that music, Ivor.
She is with you now and one day you will be reunited again.
(((HUGS))) 💜
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You have done poetry justice Ivor, excellent piece!
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Excellent Ivor 🙂
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Thank you Sue … excellent sounds good to me .. 😉🌏😘
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It’s a good word 🙂
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Lovely and nostalgic dear Ivor 🙂
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Thank uo Tanya .. 😘😉💛
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My pleasure 😇
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An attraction, too, fatal, ti, resist…
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to
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true romantic magic in this one!
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Ivor being romantic … Yeah !! .. thanks Kate
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always, romantic and soppy … such a big warm heart 😉
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Beautiful Ivor.
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Thank you Arlene
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Thank you for promoting my poem on your fabulous site 😊🌏
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Such a nice post!!..thanks so much for depicting our feelings 🤧
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Thank you for reading my poem .. 🌝🌏
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