
I Am Exhausted (a Tanka)
Beyond the Ashes
Memories and rhymes survived
Seeds were implanted
Dreams of the heart were written
Afterward, exhaustion dwelled
Ivor Steven (c) September 2022

I Am Exhausted (a Tanka)
Beyond the Ashes
Memories and rhymes survived
Seeds were implanted
Dreams of the heart were written
Afterward, exhaustion dwelled
Ivor Steven (c) September 2022
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
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Hello Ivor, I’m Queen grom Italy. It’s very beautiful this coloured blog πππ And your poetry so deep π Greetings to you and to your family π»πΌπΈπΊπΉ
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Thank you for your visiting π€πππ
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A powerful poem!
and song/video!
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“Sometimes you just need a
Need a little help
On this long way home…”
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Thank you Carolyn β¦ yes we all run into that brick wall soonerer or latererβ¦ and my party ballonβs burst .. and my continual sore is not helping π€πππ .. I have had a good sleep, this morning Iβll post the Tullawalla books that I wrapped on the weekend β¦ Frankie is no good at wrapping parcels π¦πΆπ
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Aw. I hope the soreness eases and then goes away. β€οΈ YAY for a good sleep!
Yes, poor Sir Frankie has no thumbs. π π Cooper gets out of a lot work because of that, too! π π
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Haha … smart doggies those two … πΆπΆ
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πΆπΆ Indeed! HA! π π
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I hope your back heals very soon π
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Thanks Sue .., Iβm gradually getting there β¦ but as you know itβs so very tiring π€πππ
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It is, very much so. π
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Yes frustrating.. but I am adjusting and coping ok π€ππ
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Well done. That seems to be the way it happened.
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Haha .. my retirement years seem very busy Dwight
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You are doing so well, Ivor
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I’m gradually learning about the “Selling” part of writing ….
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My friend Mike Kindred had a book on group work turned down by 40 publishers before deciding to do it himself – it then became a good seller
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From little things big grow β¦
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Well done and a nice deserved rest with Frankie waiting. π₯°
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Haha …. I should take a leaf out of Frankie’s book, he’s a “master rester”
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Ashes are an amazing fertlizer for those seeds.
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Yeah .. natureβs cycle of life π
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very melancholic … hope you’re feeling better very soon! Congrats on the book π
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Thank you Kateβ¦ Iβm finding the promotional and selling side of writing very tiring .. but Iβll be ok once I get used to it π€ππ
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not for me, it’s a pressure we don’t need …
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Thank you sincerely for supporting my poems on your fabulous site π€ππ
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Beautifully written β€
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Thank you kindly
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I can identify! Getting a book out there is tiring work π
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Hard, but personally very rewarding
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Agree! π
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