An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
The World’s Crimes (a Tanka)
At Weekly Prompts the Wednesday Challenge is the word: BELONGING. Please go over and visit their fabulous site by clicking on >> Here. Below is my poem about how we all belong to this World, and we all want peace …
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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11 thoughts on “The World’s Crimes (a Tanka)”
Good one, Ivor! We must rise above the world’s crimes and try to be our best selves, one person at a time. 🙂 Thank you for reminding us in such an engaging manner! ❤ ❤ ❤
The birds they sang
At the break of day
Start again
I heard them say
Don’t dwell on what has passed away
Or what is yet to be
Ah, the wars they will be fought again
The holy dove, she will be caught again
Bought and sold, and bought again
The dove is never free
Ring the bells that still can ring
Forget your perfect offering
There is a crack, a crack in everything
That’s how the light gets in
… Leonard Cohen
Oh, I absolutely love this poem, Ivor! And paired with that song…perfection! 🙂
Such powerful truth, encouragement, inspiration and hope! I will think of this poem and each day resolve to keep climbing…to keep working to make the peace bells chime!!! Live in peace, modeling peace, promoting peace, creating peace! 🙂
❤️☮️🔔❤️
(((HUGS))) 🙂
The world wants peace ☮️ and can be achieved if first we stop world poverty … that is where it starts 🤗🌏☮️😍📘 Thank you Carolyn for your supportive comments 🐶🌻☮️
Good one, Ivor! We must rise above the world’s crimes and try to be our best selves, one person at a time. 🙂 Thank you for reminding us in such an engaging manner! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you Cheryl, and I took this lovely photo of sky this morning and thought we are all under the one roof 🌏🤗💕🐶
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Beautiful, Ivor.
You are so right – but what a pity that some in the world need to be reminded.
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Thank you Sue… and our is here to be shared … we all live under the one roof 🤗🌏
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The bells never give up hoping for peace
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The birds they sang
At the break of day
Start again
I heard them say
Don’t dwell on what has passed away
Or what is yet to be
Ah, the wars they will be fought again
The holy dove, she will be caught again
Bought and sold, and bought again
The dove is never free
Ring the bells that still can ring
Forget your perfect offering
There is a crack, a crack in everything
That’s how the light gets in
… Leonard Cohen
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Oh, I absolutely love this poem, Ivor! And paired with that song…perfection! 🙂
Such powerful truth, encouragement, inspiration and hope! I will think of this poem and each day resolve to keep climbing…to keep working to make the peace bells chime!!! Live in peace, modeling peace, promoting peace, creating peace! 🙂
❤️☮️🔔❤️
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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The world wants peace ☮️ and can be achieved if first we stop world poverty … that is where it starts 🤗🌏☮️😍📘 Thank you Carolyn for your supportive comments 🐶🌻☮️
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wow, i love this Ivor! 🙏🏼
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Thank you kindly Cindy
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you’re welcome Ivor! 💗
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