This is the second piece that I wrote on Monday morning (Sunday afternoon PDT) when I attended the Writing Circle Poetry Group via Zoom with our host/convener, the gracious Ali Grimshaw >> https://flashlightbatteries.blog/online-writing-circles/ and after listening to her recite a second selected piece of poetry, we were then encouraged to write our own poetic response in “6 mins” … and mine was a short 6 line poem
Somewhere, Beyond My Time
Please give me more time
Time to lay a foundation stone
So, I can build my marble stairway
The stairway I need to create
The stairway that I must climb
A climb to somewhere, beyond my time

Until Eyes Hear Sound
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Really thought provoking
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Thank you Derrick … we are presented with thought provoking poem that evokes an imaginative response
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Stirring, Ivor.
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Thank you very much Punam 😊😍📖
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My pleasure. 😊❤️
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So beautiful and thought provoking.
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Thank you very much Sadje … life is a stairway, one step at a time 😊😍
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It sure is. Hopefully we go up and not down💞
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Falling down a stairwell is definitely not the right way 😊
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Nope 🥲
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You did well in such a short space of time. 🙂
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Thank you Sue … it’s a good challenge and I seem to cope ok 📖😊
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This is riveting, Ivor. Captivating!
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Thank you very much for wonderful comment … I enjoy the challenge of producing a reasonable poem in “6” minutes 📖😊🌏
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Such a gorgeous, meaningful poem Ivor! 6 minutes? Wow! 💙💙💙 “beyond my time” Lovely. You are leaving a beautiful legacy with your work.
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Thank you very much for lovely words Cheryl … 6 mins is quite a challenge but somehow I come up with the words 😊🌏📖😍
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Very cool! Well done, mate. An inspirational zoom indeed
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Thanks Ryan … the Zoom meetings are friendly and productive 😊🌏📖
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Great, Ivor! A beautiful wonderful poem! And in only 6 minutes! Wowza! 🙂
I like how it flows, I like it’s message!
Yes, we must keep climbing that staircase…onward and upward!
(((HUGS))) 🙂 ❤️❤️❤️ 🙂
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Thank you Carolyn .. the atmosphere of these Writing Circle poetry meetings seem conducive for me to create my poems 💕😊🌏😍📖
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good one, and not your time yet –
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Time to go to the book fair 📚
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This makes me wonder, “What is your foundation stone made of? I really like the idea. Thank you for sharing about the writing circle. It is always a joy to write with you. I have another writing circle coming up on Saturday, March 30 at 9:30 am PDT. I have a spot left if someone ones to give it a try.
Keep shining your light, Ivor.
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Thank you Ali, I enjoyed the Meeting … Haha 9.30am PDT is 3.30am next day for me …
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Now that would be ridiculous.
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Brilliant Ivor! Beautifully expressed!
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Thank you for your generous comments Carol 😊🌏📚📖
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Time is, limited for, all of us, and, we don’t know, when we’re set to, expire, so, through trial and, error, we slowly, learn, to, not make the, same mistakes in love that, we’d, already, made the, last time, and, hopefully, when we, finally, get it, RIGHT, we haven’t, run, out of time…but, that’s, rarely, the case, because, usually, we all need to be on our, deathbeds, before we receive that, NEEDED, WAKE-UP, C-A-L-L! And, it’d be, too, late…
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Yes … time hears no commands and love is not declined.
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A philosophic view of a life goal to accomplishhment.
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Thank you kindly Gerry
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Very welcome.
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